heclgehog

I like this poem, mainly because I can relate to the subject matter. At first read through the only things I could pick up was: "To tussle with the thoughts ...

Take the word that from the second line and put it in the 3rd line. It sounds so off and this poem will flow so much better if you fix ...

Somehow, I know there is an enemy from behind. Elaborate on this. This is definitely a good time to add in some really vivid and unique but useful description as ...

I really liked this. It had consistent repetition which is always great. All the stanzas were the same length pretty much which is very good for people like me how ...

I thought this was funny. And it reminds me of how a lot of online fiction written by young teens is basically this. Just them writing stories about their daydreams ...

I really like this. I like how you talk about using big words and not always completely understanding what they mean, and then you go forth and use a lot ...

This was definitely a narrative poem and to be completely honest I think it could work a lot better if you just turned it into a short story. It didn't ...

I really like this, how forwards has a totally different meaning than backwards. I feel like this could be a lot stronger if you somehow managed to add another stanza ...

This was a very dramatic poem. Not that there is anything wrong with that, it's just that typically most poetry is a bit silly so it's refreshing to see something ...

I liked this poem, I feel like the subject matter is easily relateable and that is always a great basis for any kind of literature. I also liked the structured ...

I liked how soft and reminiscent this felt. But the ending seemed kind of cut off. The poem had a pattern of what happened and then how that affected the ...

This had a nice flow to it. Plus the subject matter was cool too. I could definitely see this being like a pledge of allegiance type thing in some medieval ...

I like how the stanzas were set up, it gave more meaning and felt more descriptive and made it a bit easier to read. The punctuation was way off though. ...

I really liked the subject matter of this poem, not just because it was unique but also because I can totally agree with it. But I really don't like how ...

I really liked this poem. It seemed very raw and had nice personal details. It had a lot of good details to be honest. I liked how the 2nd and ...