harrington

Hi there, Like GreenTulip said, it was a tiny bit on the boring side but it wasn't THAT bad. I actually really liked the idea of it, but I didn't ...

Hi there, I thought this was really well written, and very heart felt. It felt realistic and like we were intruding in the speaker's thoughts. Just remember that 'mum' should ...

Hi there, I thought this was nice. I think it might need to be re-drafted once more just to make sure everything flows, because I feel there's something missing. I'm ...

Hi there, I really liked this one. I thought it was really well executed and well written again. I love the imagery you used and some of the words were ...

Hi there, So like the other reviewers, I would say it's very basic. What I would do is read more poetry and read more books. It's not at all bad ...

Hi there, So I actually read this over a couple of times and I think I understand it the more I read it. It's a lot deeper than just a ...

Hi there, Now, don't get me wrong, my first thought was that it was a little 'love lost' cliched, but I'm going to put that to one side because it's ...

Hi there, So I liked this, I thought it was well expressed and written well. I really enjoyed this line: 'The world spun around his own axis.' It's a fantastic ...

Hi there, So my first thoughts when I read this was that I liked it. I really liked it. It actually sort of reminded my of Shakespeare if that's possible. ...

Hi there, I've just read over it and I think the message you're trying to bring out is really clear, which is always a good thing when writing poetry. However, ...

Hi there, I read this over and I thought it was a fun idea. I liked the idea of a first date with someone/something really quite unconventional. When it's over ...

Hi there, I first read this poem and I really liked it. It was beautifully written and I loved the idea and execution of it. The lines I especially liked ...

Hi, So when I first read this I thought it was good. Not amazingly fantastic but still, good. I think another reviewer pointed out, there's no need for the speech ...

Hi there, So I liked the beginning of this, it was like we were following the speaker's train of thought and an instant connection was made with the speaker in ...

Hi, So I smiled when I finished this poem because I was expecting something different but it almost seems like a tongue in cheek sort of thing. You sort of ...