Hey! Just hear to leave a quick review. First, I would like to say that you get brownie points for using a picture of Ian Lol. Now let me get to the serious topic of your poem. I enjoyed your poem and it made me linger for more. I was not ready for the poem to end in all honesty. I felt the emotion from the poem. I felt the sexual tension from the poem and the imagery enhanced it. The quotes to start off the poem was clever and a nice touch. It really keeps the reader clung to your poem from the beginning. The flow of the poem was also fantastic. I actually have no critiques. I adored this poem. You did a fantastic job!
Points: 11
Reviews: 24
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