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"A turtle can be a fish if he wants to be. Don't spoil his dreams." ~Brendon Urie

  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: ramshackle

    Hello, hello, gxldencrxwns here for a review. I'd like to get what I think aside first, then I'll get to your questions at the bottom. As for the actual poem ...

    Jul 4, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Deleted

    Well, it seems we meet again in another one of your poems. Let's get right down to it! My word will have a ^ next to it. The sunshine is ...

    Jul 4, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Dear, Mortals: Devil's Love

    Hello, hello, gxldencrxwns here for a review. Despite the short length of the poem, it told quite a lot, not gonna lie! I'm getting a vibe that that female described ...

    Jul 3, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Deleted

    Hello, hello, gxldencrxwns here for a review. I won't be able to say much about this because of it's shorter than normal length but every word counts, right? The vibes ...

    Jul 3, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: A Day In Early April

    Hello, hello, gxldencrxwns here for a review. Overall I don't have much to say about this because of its length, but I'll try my best. What really did knock me ...

    Jul 2, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: most beautiful of all

    Hello, hello, gxldencrxwns here for a review. The poem's overall idea/theme is pretty good and was handled and worked well. Good job. I really didn't see any rhyming so I'm ...

    Jul 1, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: My Biggest Fear

    Hello, hello, gxldencrxwns here for a review. I'll go by reviewing this stanza by stanza. My words will have a ^next to it. What if I told you that my ...

    Jul 1, 2017
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Exorbitant self love

    Hello, hello, gxldencrxwns here for a review. When I read the description, I though this poem was going to talk bad about Narcissists in relationships, and I almost skipped over ...

    Jun 22, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: They Told Me

    Hello, hello, gxldencrxwns here for a review. The honesty and rawness in this poem is great. You can hear the pain and hurt pain from past experiences through the words ...

    Jun 22, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Bad Begets Bad

    Hello, hello, gxldencrxwns here for a review. As far as poems go, this one isn't particularly my favorite one I've reviewed, but I still like it. I enjoy the theme/plot, ...

    Jun 22, 2017
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: What is Grief?

    Hello, hello, gxldencrxwns here for a review. First, I want to say sorry for the loss of your dog. They're like family, and your grief must be great. I hope ...

    Jun 22, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Becoming Human

    Hello, hello, gxldencrxwns here for a review. This is one of the best poems I've ever read. The long length makes it more appealing and the theme behind it is ...

    Jun 19, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Young Love

    Hello, hello! Gxldencrxwns here for a review! Now, I'm no expert at poetry, but this is a very good piece of writing you have here. The beginning makes it sound ...

    Jun 16, 2017
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Short story

    Hello, hello, Gxldencrxwns here for a review. I really enjoyed this short story of yours. The theme of this story was very smooth and you had a good plot sorted ...

    Jun 15, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Health Re: she calls me selfish

    Hello, hello. Gxldencrxwns here for a review. I really like this poem. I'm assuming this is about a lover, parents, or any loved one. I get a feeling that the ...

    Jun 15, 2017


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