Hello, hello! Gxldencrxwns here for a review! Now, I'm no expert at poetry, but this is a very good piece of writing you have here.
The beginning makes it sound like the typical high school girl love story, to be honest. Nothing special, all cliche. However, the title, "Lover" gives it a special feeling. I don't know why though. Anyways, moving on.
As we move on closer to the end, it seems to get more emotional. For example:
What I mean is that no matter how big or small of a fight we might have,
I will still love you,
and that is for sure.
It shows that the narrator still loves this person, even if said person hurts him/her or leaves him/her. I actually find that to be quite sad, you still love that person no matter what they did to you. That's pretty deep.
Overall, I don't see much wrong with this, the spelling and grammar seem alright, but some lines don't rhyme up correctly, as the last reviewer had pointed out.
Keep up the good work!
~Gxldencrxwns
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