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"A turtle can be a fish if he wants to be. Don't spoil his dreams." ~Brendon Urie

  • Poetry » Spiritual, Historical Fiction Re: ~The sea makes us sick~

    Hello, GinaERufo! Gxldencrxwns here for a review! Let's get right into it, shall we? First comment: In the first, second, third, and fifth stanza, I feel the line "The sea ...

    Jul 23, 2017
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Tree

    Hello! Gxldencrxwns here for a review. Now, I did like the story, however in many parts, detail is lacking. Like torches before me has said, the first paragraph is bland. ...

    Jul 22, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Chloe's Poem

    Hello, RossLighting. Gxldencrxwns here for a review! First comment: I first wanted to note that the last line, the one in parenthesis, I think it would be better fitting as ...

    Jul 20, 2017
  • Poetry » Health, Dramatic Re: Headache (parody of "Eyelash")

    Hello, screamingsloth. Gxldencrxwns here for a review! When I saw the word "Eyelash" in the title, I knew I had to click on this. The same humor from the original ...

    Jul 21, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Loved Then Put Aside

    Hello, hello! Gxldencrxwns here for a review! I find the concept/theme behind the poem to be very nice. Thye different scenarios shown through each stanza was nice, and the title ...

    Jul 20, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I'm Born A Girl

    Hello, smiksha! Gxldencrwns here for a review and a welcome to YWS! Let's get right into the review! I would guess that this poem is about the problems girls face, ...

    Jul 19, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Addiction

    Hello, FairyLight! Gxldencrxwns here for a review on your lovely piece! I just have to say, I loved this! This is the second-third poem I've read about things like this, ...

    Jul 18, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Deleted

    Hello, everyone involved! Gxldencrxwns, once again, here to leave a review! I saw that snowmonkey9 posted that they wanted this work reviewed on their wall, so that's what I'm here ...

    Jul 17, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: hatchet

    Hello, Nikayla! Gxldencrxwns, once again, here for a review! First, I'll start with your questions, then I'll point out anything I have to say, which is not very much. First ...

    Jul 17, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 1 -read the prologue for the story-

    Hello, AriannaC! Gxldencrxwns, once again, here for a review! I see you finally updated the story, and I couldn't wait to read it! Now, as I said in the Prologue, ...

    Jul 16, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Deleted

    Hello, snowmonkey9! Gxldencrxwns, once again, here for a review! I believe this is the largest collaborative poem you've published, with six users, counting you. That's what I like. The more ...

    Jul 16, 2017
  • Short Story » Horror, Realistic Re: Old Dog Food Bag.

    Hello, AsherIsAnon! Gxldencrwns, yet again, here for a review. Now, before I begin anything, I want to ask you something. Did this actually happen to you? Is this all true, ...

    Jul 16, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Lies

    Hey! Another collaborative poem! Yay! Okay, so the vibes I'm getting are one friend lied to another friend, and that friend group they were in fell apart because of it. ...

    Jul 15, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Scarlet Night

    Hello, Queenie! Gxldencrxwns here for a review! Before I say anything else, wow, amazing! I love the concept. I wonder how long it took for you to come up with ...

    Jul 14, 2017
  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: Death my darling.

    Hello, AsherIsAnon! Gxldencrxwns here for a review. I have reviewed one of your other pieces of writing in the past, and I must say this one is much better. It's ...

    Jul 14, 2017


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