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gruzinkerbell

In their hearts humans plan their course, but the LORD establishes their steps.

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Literature Re: Almost June: Chapter 1

    Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - First off, what a great opening sentence! I think it packed a lot of intrigue ...

    Aug 21, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Garnets on the Asteric Plane - Prologue

    How did I only find this gem now? Anyways, hi! It's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - The character building here is really ...

    Aug 21, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Held by Moments

    Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - There's a lot of emotion in this! It's strong, passionate, and your word choice excellently ...

    Aug 19, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Stuck.

    Hi Rae! It's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - I enjoyed how there was a hidden meaning in this poem (ala the bolded ...

    Aug 8, 2024
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: What am I?

    Hello Vampy! It's Serrurie, here to leave a review I haven't read this series of your left, so pardon me if I get a few things wrong)! Let's dive in: ...

    Aug 8, 2024
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Laziness has no reward

    Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review (and a late welcome to YWS)! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - The names in this story are really unique and ...

    Aug 8, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: deep sink(ing) thoughts

    Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - Never would I have thought I could feel sympathetic for a sink . I mean, ...

    Aug 8, 2024
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: I Like to Think I'm an Author

    Hi Ley! First off, you always have the prettiest covers on these :D. Secondly, let me actually review this. Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - You have great imagery ...

    Aug 8, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: she's dead now.

    Hello Ley! It's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - This is a lovely poem that I think we see happen too much in ...

    Aug 3, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: I hate that I love you.

    Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff -I like how this can be read in either direction; it's something hard to accomplish, and ...

    Aug 3, 2024
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Petunia

    Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - Wait. They died? This is SUCH an amazing poem! The twist, the story, the figurative ...

    Aug 3, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I love you (I feel like screaming)

    HI Valkyria! It's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - I think it's interesting how this is formatted like we just saw you type ...

    Jul 29, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Perfect In Every Way

    Hi Ellie! It's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: Honestly, I really needed this. When I read this, I just felt really touched. I really just pictured ...

    Jul 29, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: When It Wasn't Night

    Hi Inferno. It's Serrurie, here to leave a review (but you already knew that). I've been reading a lot of poetry, but I've kinda just been following Ellie around to ...

    Jul 29, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: no soul scratches like a scorned woman or a starved pack of wolves

    Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - Honestly, this is so beautiful! I love cozy poems like this, where they're super soft ...

    Jul 29, 2024


You know how hard it is to feel like an extreme falcon-headed combat machine when somebody calls you "chicken man"?
— Rick Riordan, The Red Pyramid