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Hi, Yeah, like Winter said, the last sentence struck hard. Anyway, merry welcome to YWS. I love your avvie...it's invincible... **REVIEW STARTS HERE** Firstly, this poem starts slow, and it's ...

Hi, Lovely. This is, like the others reviewer said, gloomy and sad. It is so complicated. **THE REVIEW STARTS HERE** FIRST!!!~ The second line. I seriously hate it. Sorry for ...

Hi, Here I am, leaving some kind of review for you as requested. I don't know what to write, really. I'm quiet puzzled if you ask me. **The somewhat a ...

Hi, Such simple words... This question is simply best to leave unanswered...if you ask me...XD **REVIEW STARTS HERE** All the un-capitalizations words are truly best to leave it like that. ...

Hi, Happy autumn! This is a good and enjoyable poem. **REVIEW STARTS HERE!** I don't know what to write here... This is just good. Mainly because the tone you used. ...

Hi, Emotional. Say, is this real... I think this is good. **REVIEW STARTS HERE** The typography is suits, I think, but what's its role? Whatever, I like some parts that ...

Hi, This type of poetry somehow becomes like a little viral now, huh? Do you take inspiration from the Worst Day Ever? written by Chanie Gorkin...here's a link to the ...

Hi, I was attracted with the long title and here I am sitting on a chair. And as for you information, I will review this like I review a poem. ...

Hi, Acm~chan, I don't think I have reviewed your short stories before, but now, here I am writing this review. Okay! You begin the story with a sentence that contain ...

Hi, Good one, I thought. So, this is quite dangerous for a poem. It flows and yet, it nice. The image is like popping out in my brain. The title ...

Hi, What a story here! >;< This thing intrigues me. You used some interesting perspective of a child watching his/her little brother/sister died. I couldn't agreed more. It is so ...

Hi, Oh yeah, I did cried a lot and I won't pay the band and this surely bites. Technically speaking, this is beautiful as jellies. You made a interesting "philosophy" ...

Hi, These were quite inspiring words. I'm not sure that this can be called as a "true" short story, but it was meaningful enough. Speaking to ourselves could be an ...

Hi, I'm sorry because I don't read the previous reviews. I know I'm lazy. It is a reality, an actuality. I feel so proud of you. I wish I could ...

Hi, I'm surprised. Very surprised. Your tone used in this story is so soft. I love it. It feels so smooth and relaxing. And I feel like sleeping. And then ...