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Hi, Oh my. A sad poem. I love this genre of poem. Gosh! **Review Starts Here (Review Day's Review)** Perhaps trapped in a sad song I want to comment on ...

Hi, A great theme, I like it. **Review Starts Now! (REVIEW DAY'S REVIEW)** This is sparkling. I love many things in the poem. This relates many things. The vivid words ...

Hi, Nire, we meet again, aye? **Revving up for review** I love the twist here. I think this is an NA story-like. (NA stands for Near-Adult.) So much for love ...

Hi, Sweetheart, why must you breathe? To live? or to spread lies? or to die in the right time? Whatever you choices might be, keep that in your mind: You ...

Hi, cpedro, we meet again, aye? This is so simple that brings a lot of hidden insights in this. *Revving for review* The italicized words! The italicized words! In the ...

Hi, We meet again, aye? Good to see you around posting some new poem! My first impression towards this poem is...interesting perception of fear. Yeah, interesting. And your A/N never ...

Hi, Whoa. I don't know what colors else to say. **REVIEW STARTS HERE** True enough... Your use of imagery creates a scene so peaceful, so beautiful, you would think that ...

Hi, Oh, sea and ship are the things bounded to be together. ^^REVIEW STARTS HERE^^ The picture is lovely... ...okay, I shouldn't be looking after that. My mistakes. Your poem ...

Hi , I love it. I can relate this thing entirely with my life but the granddad... I don't get to see his face. I will treasure this. Thanks for ...

Hi, CAUTION... ***REVIEW STARTS HERE*** I love this topic personally because I don't kiss any people yet. You bring some images in this poem. For me, they are quite appropriate ...

Hi, a good way. **REQUESTED REVIEW STARTS HERE** I like some of the realistic-logy here. It seems true enough and vivid, but some go astray and going astray is really ...

Hi, I asked you, how's a person choking on air. Nevertheless, it is an interesting title. **REVIEW STARTS HERE** The opening is quite normal and the second and third line ...

Hi, (NOTE: I'll give you short review, I'm sorry) I feel so distant...Ah, I miss @Atsmai so much...And I feel so ashamed. **REVIEW STARTS HERE** I do know Atsmai, so ...

Hi, A serious topic to make a poem. Interesting. But you know what, the war isn't about the country anymore...it's starting to involve many other countries. Never mind that, I ...

Hi, I agreed with Choco that you did a good job putting emotions into words! This piece is interesting! **REVIEW STARTS HERE** The questions and the answers. Yeah, this poem ...