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Re: Nothing at All
I liked your poem overall, but I thought it would be better with a few less question marks because they get a little bit monotonous. Keep writing. Fiction
Jan 22, 2012 -
Re: Those things I cannot say.
think that you poem is also pretty good. I don't really think it needs any improvement and you should not doubt your writing abilities. I like that this poem has ...
Jan 22, 2012 -
Re: Hope
I just read your poem and I think we have two very different versions of hope but that is okay. Have a good day and thank you for reviewing my ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: stones and little bird bones
Wow! This is awesome. It is the type of poetry that you would expect to find in a book. I love your use of figurative language.I envy you right now. ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Detroit life
Thank you for the honest review. I know it needs help and I have always had a hard time with punctuation.
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: The Christians' Lie
This is really good I like it a lot.I have one suggestion... And God don't want you anyway now I would change don't to doesn't. Have a good day. Fiction
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: Memoirs, Part One-Chapter One
That is interesting. I have never heard of this organization before. Your essay is certainly informative. Good luck and keep writing fiction.
Mar 25, 2010 -
Re: Mother
Thank you all for the reviews. :smt003
Mar 18, 2010 -
Re: Shades of Violet(4)[death]
I like it.I thought you were very descriptive when you described the protagonist fainting. I don't see anything wrong with it really, although I am not a stickler on punctuation. ...
Mar 11, 2010 -
Re: Thread of L.Poems
I like the poem "Falling Up".I think you did a good job but you could elaborate on them a little to include more imagery. Right now I think they seem ...
Mar 8, 2010 -
Re: In cold blood
Thank you all for the reviews. I called them socials instead of socs because I didn't want to confuse anyone. Thank you for the punctuation tips if I turn this ...
Mar 3, 2010 -
Re: Oh little marshmallow Peeps
snoink, where I live the peeps they sell are chocolate, green and yellow for Valentines day. The chocolate ones are little bears and the rest are chicks. I would live ...
Feb 14, 2010 -
Re: My Phenology
Thanks for the comments :smt003 .
Feb 13, 2010 -
Re: Daybreak
Sometimes that happens when you have it set on poetry format. I hope that helps. Have a great night. I love your poem. Fiction :smt003
Feb 11, 2010 -
Re: Amber-Liquid Death
This is a fantastic poem. I think your discriptions are clear and they paint a vivid picture. I love your title. Have a good day fiction
Feb 10, 2010