Nothing at All

by AuroraThorne

  • Poetry
  • Other

Published January 23, 2012

Where do we go when our minds wander?

Is it a dream?

Is it a memory?

Is it a song?

Is it a story?

Or…

Is it nothing?

What do we think when we are lost?

Where am I?

Will I get hurt?

Someone help!

Or…

Is it nothing?

What do we hear when something has gone wrong?

Is it screaming?

Is it crying?

Is it a dying breath?

Or…

Is it nothing?

Where do we go when our eyes go blank?

To a safe place?

To a memory?

To an imaginary place?

To nowhere?

Where do we go when we sleep?

Do we dream?

Do we fall?

Do we die?

Or…

Do nothing at all?

What do we do when we are hurt?

Do we cry?

Do we hit something?

Or…

Do nothing at all?

What do we do when we don't know what to do?

Do we panic?

Do we cry?

Do we run?

Do we hide?

Or…

Do we do nothing at all?

What do we do when we just lay down and think?

It's simple…

We do nothing at all

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fiction903
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fiction903 commented Comment · Jan 23, 2012

I liked your poem overall, but I thought it would be better with a few less question marks because they get a little bit monotonous.
Keep writing.
Fiction

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Soulkana wrote a review Review · Jan 23, 2012

Well that was inspirational and a bit confusing...was the subject just meant to say we do nothing at all? Either way I didn't find any spelling mistakes and it flows rather nicely. Hopefully you'll be putting more up on here soon and keep on writing which I know you have the creativity to do so >> But Good luck and hopefully you'll get more reviews sister!
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You wake up in the morning and it feels impossible? Good. You do it anyway.
— Martin Scorcese