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  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Atlantic Emerald

    Hi Felistia here with a review. Wow, what a great piece of writing. The descriptions are excellent and carry the story well. The pictures are crystal clear from the moment ...

    Oct 26, 2015
  • Other » General, General Re: Unlucky (intro)

    Hi Felistia here with a review. First I love the start, it builds up a perfect amount of tension and suspense. The description adds a dark mood to the piece ...

    Oct 26, 2015
  • Other » Other, Humor Re: Ten Reasons why Helena is Afraid of YWS

    Hi Felistia here with a review. What a hilarious piece of writing, it had me giggling the whole way through. It was a good list and had me glued to ...

    Oct 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Leaving (Edited)

    Hi Felistia here with a review. Oh my goodness, I love this poem. It is so moving and full of interesting words. I love that it is about a wolf. ...

    Oct 26, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Cold-Hearted Prince

    Hi Felistia here with a review. I really like this poem and the concept. I do wish there was some more colour, but that is just my opinion. It flows ...

    Oct 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: woman in chains

    Hi Felistia here with a review. It seems a little bland, I can see what you are going for and the rhymes work, but the seem a little force. It ...

    Oct 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Starry Dance

    Hi Felistia here with a review. What beautiful writing, unlike anything I have seen. I felt like I was right there dancing to the music to. The emotion in this ...

    Oct 26, 2015
  • Other » Culture, Fantasy Re: The City Goblin

    Hi Felistia here with a review. Excellent poem, I love the character and how you described him. The poem flows really well and there are no boring bits. I can ...

    Oct 26, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Fantasy Re: #2 valley wide

    Hi felistia here with another review again. I love your poems, they are so moving. The imagery is great, but this one is not one of your best. The rhymes ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: Sky Is Dead

    Hi Felistia here with a review. Brilliant, haunting poem. The sense of foreboding is fascinating and the rhythm is perfect. Is there a underlying message in this, because it sounds ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Narrative Re: The Bunny's Love

    Great job. I love that you wrote it as a story, it make it all the more interesting. It is very easy to read and flows nicely. The only problem ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: On the Wind

    Felistia here with a review Yet another great poem. The beginning is brilliant, a perfect way to start the poem. I can relate to this poem very easily as my ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Storm.

    Oh my goodness. This is excellent writing. The way it carries you away and holds you there until poem finishes is brilliant. It flows so well and is easy to ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Fantasy Re: snowflakes

    Hi Felistia I would like to write a review. I love the description in this poem, it puts me right there. I can almost feel the snowflakes on my skin ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, Realistic Re: Pale Yellow Bricks

    Felistia here, I would like to write a review. I love the way this poem reads, it is so smooth and before you know it, it ends. The ending is ...

    Oct 25, 2015


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