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Re: clam
Hi AliceAfternoon, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Title: The title that you presented was simple and yet... it described everything there is to ...
Jun 24, 2016 -
Re: Lines of Faith: Chapter 1, Part 2/2
Hi Meandbooks, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Chapter plot: Okay so the plot of this story is starting to kick in and we ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Gasping for Breath (contest entry)
Hi Justlittleoleme2, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Title: I thought this was a very appropriate title for your story. It was shown towards ...
Jun 23, 2016 -
Re: Lines of Faith: Chapter 1 (Edited, Part 1/2)
Hi Meandbooks, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Chapter Plot: So this story sounds like it's going to be a teenage school story based ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: The Death That Happens While You're Eating
Hi acm, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Title: It took me a little while to work out what your title meant. Now that ...
Jun 23, 2016 -
Re: I'm on death row for a crime I didn't commit.
Hi Annaclare, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Okay so I think the biggest problem with this poem is the fact that you've written ...
Jun 21, 2016 -
Re: Winter's Hope
Hi XxXTheSwordsmanXxX, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Title: I found this title really interesting and a great way to pull me into the ...
Jun 22, 2016 -
Re: Children of the Dawn- Prologue
Hi TheIllusiveIntellect, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Title: I thought that the title you chose for your story was interesting and drew me ...
Jun 20, 2016 -
Re: Sunrise's Quest Prologue
Hi Petalstar125, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Title: Okay so lets start with your title. I think Sunrise's Quest is an intriguing title ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Begin again
Hi DivergentDemigod, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Title: I think this was a great title for your poem since you had it repeat ...
Jun 19, 2016 -
Re: Project Flux {Book one of the Flux Files}-Chapter 3
Hi Ashley123, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Story plot: This was yet another interesting plot in your gripping story. I'd say that it's ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: yellow fog
Hi spectator, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Title: The title to this poem is both intriguing and works with poem. The title Yellow ...
Jun 18, 2016 -
Re: If Only She Had Thought First.
Hi Zaza, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Title: I liked that the title to your story was the very first line, but on ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Storm
Hi tzipwrite, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Title: I thought the title to this poem was quite ordinary and bit over used. I'd ...
Jun 17, 2016 -
Re: Earthlings
Hi Charlotte2, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful night. :D P.s sorry about the short review. It's very late at night for me. :D Title: The ...
Jun 16, 2016