fallenoutofgrace

Hello, first off let me say that I do agree with your idea and that your title and description did intrude me. What I enjoyed about your essay ways that ...

Hi there its fallen :3 let's start off with the positives? I have to admit when I read the title I thought it was going to be a mlp fan ...

First off, I am laughing my butt off right now. Your certainly excelled in the humorous part of your limerick. Whether it was used or not thanks for sharing it. ...

I like the idea of the poem a lot. but only question i have is did you mean to make it in paragraph form and unstructured like most poems? was ...

This is a very cute humorous poem that i simply enjoyed. I enjoyed how you made your lines end with either a question mark or a sentence it helps to ...

Well you certainly made this poem a broken mind i liked how you made the two sides split apart as if the mind is broken and your thoughts are scattered ...

Okay so first off i can see why you liked this its so dark and enticing it leaves the reader changed as well. Now the question i had was when ...

oh my gosh * belly roll laughing* that was so funny im like dang. At first i thought it would be like a Rockefeller taking out the small oil company ...

off the bat i agree with Lord Greenleaf " This is a very intriguing poem you've got there, but I love. I was picturing this jerk tearing apart this girl's ...

I liked this because you made the feeling of an anxiety attack come to life. I enjoyed your imagery and how it was like you were having an anxiety attack ...

Okay hi there it's fallen here time for another review. First off this is such a beautiful poem and while a short poem and while i do say short it ...

Completely agree with Nightwolf " For starters, I'd like to congratulate you on conveying such a clear point. Sometimes it's very easy to wander away from the original point of ...

Completely agree with thehotinphycotic " I love Doctor Who. So of course I had to read this. I liked this generally, and you did a good job of telling the ...

* sniffles* alright one sec for the review trying to swipe away the allergies of a beautiful poem away. This was just so touching and so remarkable words cannot be ...

I completely agree with blackbunny1998 " This letter is simply beautiful. I can see how this reflects to my problem. There was this boy I know, and he and I ...