Warning: This work has been rated 16+ for language.
There once was a man from Matlas,
Whose balls were made of fine brass,
And in stormy weather,
They both clanged together,
And sparks flew out of his ass!
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First off, I am laughing my butt off right now. Your certainly excelled in the humorous part of your limerick. Whether it was used or not thanks for sharing it. Thanks for the best minute of my life. Now les get started shall we? First off I enjoyed how you capilized each line and followed the basic rules for a limerick the words sounding or rhyming with one another makes the appropriate limerick available and helping you make toward its fullest potential. Secondi enjoyed the humor because it literally caused a smile on my face an brightened my day along with it. Your poem definitely cheers the readers up and laughs until the die from laughter. Overall, Very Very funny poem and I really did enjoy it I do not have any negatives for this poem at all.
~fallen
Oh my god...I am like so dying right here xD Best 30 seconds of my life for reviewing this poem. Oh god, if you need me, I'm just gonna consider myself dead. Lol!
Ha! This made me laugh! It's a common sort of humor nowadays, and honestly, I only read this looking for points, but I'm kind of glad I read this. It is definatley a better mind set than the rest of the poetry on here. It's all depression and cutting and death. Post more, they cheer people up
P.S. sorry for the empty boxes, I'm trying to get this to a good amount for points. I really did enjoy this though!
P.P.S. do you know how to delete reviews? I could get rid of the empty ones :S
Thanks for the cheer up! Brightened my day
-joallover
The empty boxes don't bother me.
Hiya Catcha01 here with a review ^^
Interesting...
It's a funny poem and shows that writing doesn't always have to be structured.
I see the rhyme scheme that you have initiated:
aabba
it was clever to get the humor that you wanted across through the writing, but I don't know if this was for serious purposes or humorous ones.
Please don't hate me for saying this because I did laugh at your poem I am simply unaware of your motive for coming up with such a poem.
Overall it was very comedic and funny to read. A bit shocking to read the first time, but through the shock you cant help yourself but laugh. Nice job!
~Catcha01
But the writing is structured, it's a limerick
humorus
Wow.
That's some humor you have there xD, very funny.
Though, it can be longer and could use a better rhyme scheme. Using a unique rhyme scheme makes any poem seem less obvious whenever you're using rhyming.
I don't know if you were serious when you composed this, though. Maybe better wording?
Thank you for the advice.