I love you. Even if I never have the courage to say it out loud. Even if I’m scared you won’t accept it. Even if we won’t be the same next year or next month or in five minutes. We will never be who we are in this exact moment ever again, but this moment will last forever next to all the others and right now, there is nothing I want to do more than say I love you. I love you enough that I don’t need anything else. Of course, love “doesn’t last forever” because I might hate the you that exists in five minutes, but since this moment lasts forever, so does my love for you. The more moments I spend loving you, the more it piles up in some invisible far-off world. Even if I stop right now and we grow apart and I forget the you and the me right here, there’s nothing that can touch this moment, so I will always love you. Please, no matter how much you forget, remember that. I love you.
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I completely agree with blackbunny1998 " This letter is simply beautiful. I can see how this reflects to my problem. There was this boy I know, and he and I had been friends for a long time. But one day, I confessed my love for him from a Christmas gift. He never came up to me and say anything about it, and that made me feel very bad. Now, he and I don't talk anymore. Even though he can never see that since we don't talk anymore, he'll always be in my heart...
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But again, I loved the letter you have typed, and I hope you keep going with your words that can relate to others
This letter is remarkable and really touching. I enjoyed that this letter is about loving yourself i find that not many people see that in themselves as much as they should and you clearly ended that phase by making this amazing letter. I enjoyed the simple yet beautiful meaning behind you wrote it as if it is yourself and not trying to make it fancy for the others reading its just you talking to yourself and being real which i liked. I have no negitives at all Well done and keep writing love
~ fallen
This is a great letter to write for yourself, it could definitely help you to pick yourself up once again.
I love it :3
Hi there!
I really like this. Self-love is super important. I think the sentences flowed like a stream of consciousness, but were occasionally too wordy. I would love to see the situation develop or at least have some sort of context to this letter. Keep writing!
-Lucky_Duck
This letter is simply beautiful. I can see how this reflects to my problem. There was this boy I know, and he and I had been friends for a long time. But one day, I confessed my love for him from a Christmas gift. He never came up to me and say anything about it, and that made me feel very bad. Now, he and I don't talk anymore. Even though he can never see that since we don't talk anymore, he'll always be in my heart...
But again, I loved the letter you have typed, and I hope you keep going with your words that can relate to others