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I really like your poem, but I noticed you have an apostrophe in the word hearts that doesn't need to be there. Other than that, very good. I like it ...

Hello Katie! Hmm... I would like to first suggest that you change your title, because there's a relatively famous short story with a very similar title. Here's a link if ...

Hello there, Shadow! I'm Storm! So. Let me say that I really like your concept. I reminds me of things I've written in the past, so I had a feeling ...

Hello Kim! I'm Storm to review your poem today! So, I really liked it. The first thing I want to say is good job. I really like the way you ...

Hello Alliyah! I'm Storm, and I'd just like to point out a few things. First of all, I really like the story in it. Just a few hundred words, but ...

Hello Panda! (Ha-ha, I like pandas... you can tell because I got "panda" from- well... On with the review, sorry...) I'm Storm and I'll be reviewing for you today! Let ...

Ha-ha, I get bored in class all the time! Well, I'm Storm, and I'm going to be your reviewer for the day! "Hello subject seven, welcome to existence. Now, I ...

Hi, I'm storm to review your poem. :) I really can't give much criticism, just a few little nitpicks. This is really good! Verb tenses need to be watched. For ...

Hi, I'm Storm! This is a really long review, just so you're forewarned. Oh, and welcome to the site! It seems like you new, and I think you'll really like ...

Hello mono! I'm Storm to review your poem! First of all, let me say I really like this. It has a haunting sort of feeling to this, like you hollowed ...

Hello Wishes, I'm Storm and I'm going to be reviewing your poem today. First of all, I'm glad you've joined YWS. Everyone here is very nice, and even having been ...

Hello there, Exception! I'm Storm here to review your poem. First off, let me say I found I could relate to this very well, although I was trying to think ...

Hello there, I'm Storm and I'm going to be reviewing this for you today. First of all, let me congratulate you. This is a really good piece. I like how ...

Hallo, I noticed that you have no reviews and so I decided to be the first. I really am not partial to your rhyme scheme. Let me use a simile: ...

Hello H.H., this is Storm here to review your poem. :) I really like the irregular lengths of the stanzas. Usually it kind of bugs me because they don't look ...