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Re: A bedtime story
Hi!! I've never reviewed any of you works before, so I'm really excited to check it out. This whole piece has a very whimsical, dreamy sort of feel, and after ...
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Re: The Language of Dust
Took me 4 reads to soak it all in. Wow. This speaks to me in such a deep way. Its such a profound echo of the cultural, ethnic, diasporic ties ...
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Re: The Menu
I've been scrolling for a work that really speaks to me to actually think on and leave a review for, and yours is just beautiful
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Re: Warm Concrete
Alex, I absolutely loved this! I don't see many poem like this with such good rhyming (and rhyme-schemes), and well, thought-out stanzas. This kind of perfect, skippy poem structure is ...
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Re: Someone from the past
Wow, just wow. You joined YWS like 2 minutes ago and already wrote this? The descriptive writing is on-point, its genuinely perfect. I could envision the whole scene as if ...
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Re: Pancakes and Parenthood
I love this so much!! Obviously, your use of alliteration is fantastic, and it's natural enough that the first few times I read the poem, I didn't even pick up ...
Jun 5, 2025 -
Re: Questions That keeps ME up
I.am.in.LOVEEE. This is fantastic. This seems to me like the words and thoughts of an extremely burnt out person, who questions the system and 'the way things are' because they ...
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Re: Revenge - best served cold
D*MN BRO. I am NOT messing with you fs. First of all, the 'john' character isn't just a character, I have unfortunately come across people like this in real life. ...
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Re: Morning In America
I am very uncomfortable and oddly intrigued. Worst part is, I can actually imagine a future like this with the way the world is going right now. "The clock is ...
May 31, 2025 -
Re: The Solution to Fix the Education System
Hey! So I don't live in the United States, but i'd say i'm equally disgruntled with my country's education system as you are. From implementation flaws, lack of funding, not ...
May 31, 2025 -
Re: she says i have strange inhibitions
Hey there! Getting into the poem, first thing i realize is that i love the writing style. The prose and combination of words has that jarring effect that makes you ...
May 31, 2025 -
Re: the 'a' in your name stands for alexandria
D*MN. This wrenched out something I didn't know was hidden in me. Genuinely feel like every line is to be savored, feel like burning this onto my eyelids. I can't ...
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Re: Raisa Accardi, such a sweet little thing
Hey, I'll be reviewing your work today! wanted to start off by saying that I'm not very familiar with the backstory other than the short intro you wrote, but I'm ...
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Re: and the bluejays played in the grass
Wowww! This is jarringly phenomenal. At first glance, it feels like a messy amalgamation of words and feelings, but as you keep reading, you realize that's exactly what the narrator ...
May 9, 2025
