When speaking to young adults fresh out of college, many will attest that although some of the information they learned was helpful, sitting in a classroom did not prepare them for the real world. Meanwhile, the number of unemployed adults in the U.S. seems to be growing faster than ever. Burned out from years of juggling school, extracurriculars, and work, many of the young people find themselves too exhausted to commit to a long-term career. Yet the U.S. continues to duct tape tape over the crack in its crumbling education system. This national narcissism spreads a red white and blue blanket over the sinkhole of illiterate adults, unrealized potential, and underpaid staff expected to manage everything from overcrowded classrooms to active shooters.
It is a common belief that the best way to learn is by doing. And what is more preparatory for the real world, than the real world itself? I propose we dissolve the traditional classroom school system entirely and place children in an actual environment that teaches them how to work. These children should hold real jobs where they can meaningfully contribute to society. Naturally, some reforms to the child labor laws will need to be instilled— but let’s be honest, most of those laws exist to prevent kids from missing school. If their job is their school, then those protections become superfluous. Of course, the portions about keeping children out of hazardous environments such as industrial factories or mines should remain in place— for obvious safety reasons.
Every child will be advised to have a typical 8 hour work day; however, if they are so inclined, they can work overtime to earn some extra experience. Children ages around 3-4 will enter their first childhood occupation, where they could count office supplies, sort them by color, practice writing the name of supplies on inventory sheets, among other extremely exciting and entertaining experiences. These children will be allowed two snack times— each one 30 minutes long— one hour for lunch, one hour recess, and one hour for naps.
Children ages 5-14 will have the opportunity to work as an adult’s “special helper.” It is common for children around these ages to want to play doctor, astronaut, hair stylist, etc. With this in mind, children of this age range and development will help out in any non-hazardous profession they choose. Don’t worry— the children will not be performing your surgery or shooting rockets into space. Instead, they will dress up for their job and help with rudimentary tasks, such as recording data or copy what the adult professional is doing but on a dummy. Additionally, children at this stage are welcome to jump around from profession to profession, they will be encouraged to make at least one major switch in their career around the age of 11 or 12, to try new experiences and build a diverse skill set. There will be a preliminary interview before any job placement, designed solely to give the child experience and ease the stress of future, more competitive interviews. At this stage, children will have two 30-minute snack breaks, 40 minutes for lunch, and 30 minutes for recess. Children of this age occasionally present behavioral issues, and since detention is no longer an option, the misbehavers will give up some or all of their recess time to sit in on an informative human resource presentation.
Finally, children ages 15-18 will be ready for higher management. They will apply the skills acquired through their earlier careers to areas of personal interest at a more advanced level. Most teenagers struggle to manage school, extracurriculars, and a part-time job— but having only a job takes away from stress without having to sacrifice a paycheck. By the age of 19, these new adults will be more than capable in taking on the excitement of a full-time career that aligns perfectly with the passions they’ve explored and love.
This solution is the only viable option for actually making a difference in youth education. Allowing children to choose a class they are interested in once a year in elementary or middle school would never work, because having reading, writing, spelling, and grammar as separate subjects is far more important. Abandoning the “zero tolerance policy” when referring to compliance issues such as dress code, attentiveness, and participation would lead to the students feeling they are far too human— and is a proven segue into revolution against authority, something that is simply not tolerated at a “real job” in the “real world.” Addressing a student’s misconduct and figuring out specific ways to move forward— instead of shipping them away to detention, suspending or expelling them— would lead to all out anarchy. Making tutoring for standardized tests like the SAT more accessible to people who can’t afford to pay for a better score is simply a ludicrous notion. This process would only poison children’s minds that equity should be supported.
Some adults may argue that they don’t want their children entering the rat race so young, but these are selfish viewpoints rooted in a hidden trauma inflicted by the very institution to which they now send their young, susceptible, precious babies. The adults who make these uninformed arguments often work in jobs where they feel unappreciated, unfulfilled, and unenthusiastic. According to one adult, she grew up dreaming to be a great physicist— but in school, she found she lacked the rapid comprehension other children seemed to possess. There was no further support to help her rediscover her passion. Instead, only a series of tests for “comprehension purposes” which ultimately destroyed any motivation or happiness she once had in the subject. She now works as an accountant and could not be less passionate about it. Hey, but the system said she was good at tracking expenses and numbers, so it must be good! Don’t let the school system crush your child’s dreams the way it crushed this adult’s. By allowing young children to explore their passions through the hands-on practice of working a job, they are given the room to make mistakes and fail without the overwhelming fear of a percentage ruling their lives and determining their future success.
Think of it like this: the best way to clean up a disgusting, unsafe park is to bulldoze over it and build a pristine, gray parking lot. Bulldozing the entire school system is exactly what this country needs to monetize American youth and bring the country into the future. According to the wisest people among us— our elders— the best time in American history was when children knew their place in the workforce. According to one wise elder, 102-year-old Clarence Elderson, “Back when I was a kid, we didn’t have those darn child labor laws. I dropped out of school when I was eight. I worked four full-time jobs. I turned out just fine.” Mr. Elderson is one among many intellectuals who are a living— sort of breathing— testament to the promises of allowing children to join the rat race.
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I agree that there are many flaws in the American school system that keep it from setting children up for success. Like you said, a lot of the information learned ends up being somewhat useless if it isn't directly relevant to the career they choose.
Your suggested solution of giving kids hands-on jobs reminds me of how careers used to work before the industrial revolution. It's like when families had a particular business they worked in like smithing or carpentry (like the last names smith and carpenter) where the children worked alongside adults, learning the trade so that they could take it over when they were older.
The specific age progression where kids ages 5-14 would do small jobs to help an adult and then ages 15-18 would take on slightly more challenging work before a full blown career in adulthood made me think of how knights were trained in medieval times. A boy would become a page at the age of 7 and then, at age 14, promoted to a squire(someone who took care of a knight's horse and armor) before possibly becoming a knight later. Except in your case, they would get to explore different options and decide on their own career.
If there was a way to change our society to implement these kind of changes, I think it would benefit children and our future workforce. But like eucalyptus said, it seems unlikely that the challenges it would take to change those things could be overcome easily. In American culture, since the industrial revolution, everything has been built around technology and capitalism. So the schools that were founded primarily to help people read and write so that they could be equal members of a democracy became something else.
Changing them now that they have become such a large part of everyone's lives would probably spark a lot of objection and controversy, even if it would be beneficial in the long run. Regardless, I hope that in the future, when new technology emerges and society inevitably continues to change, that those who push the change will make all the systems better, especially the education system.
Thanks for the essay! You did a good job presenting this popular issue and clearly presenting your solution, which is one that I think would do a lot to improve our society if it could be implemented to some degree.
Hey! So I don't live in the United States, but i'd say i'm equally disgruntled with my country's education system as you are. From implementation flaws, lack of funding, not using those fund for the correct purposes, incompetent staff and teachers, and subpar syllabus, woe is me. Despite not being particularly aware of the issues in the united states education system, on an intuitive level, i completely understand the problems you're highlighting.
At first glance, the solution you have highlighted might seem totally dystopian, but i think its because its just so different from what we're used to today that it seems incomprehensible.
" Think of it like this: the best way to clean up a disgusting, unsafe park is to bulldoze over it and build a pristine, gray parking lot." 100% agree, but such deep institutional changes are impossible to achieve without a multitude of equally impressive and impossible political, economic, social, cultural and public opinion changes.
The system you described is innately flawed because of its presumtiveness. Ensuring education for the first 12 years of a child's life is mandatory as they are stepping stool for skills. One cannot run before walking, cannot walk before crawling.
After that, however, a series of part-time shadowing professionals for a couple years, moving on to part-time internships, finally followed by independent, low pay, jobs all juggled with mild schoolwork will ensure that students are gaining real-life work experience while simultaneously studying topics that better help to understand and comprehend the world around them ( like math, the sciences, social science, language ).
"Mr. Elderson is one among many intellectuals who are a living— sort of breathing— testament to the promises of allowing children to join the rat race." lmao sort of breathing is WILD.
If you are genuinely unhappy about this to the point of change, and are looking for a career in the arts, i suggest after passing school to join some online courses on public policy and educational policy ( what i'm planning to do after passing my class ).
All in all, im happy to see like-minded individuals who are willing to bring change instead of simply complaining about the system and 'advocating' for change.
Hi, Cat_15! Awesome essay! This gives me huge "A Modest Proposal" vibes (although the subject matter is highly different). I love satire in general, but as a student, this piece hit home particularly well. Who needs lame, boring school? Let's just force all kids into the workforce!
For advice, all I could say is I think there needs to be a comma in line 6 between "red" and "white". But that's super nit-picky!
My favorite parts of this essay were paragraph 2 talking about remaking child labor laws and the last paragraph. Clarence Elderson is the perfect name! I adore how you call him an "intellectual" and say he's "sort of breathing". Also the part in the last paragraph about flattening the school system into a "pristine" parking lot perfectly encapsulates the tone. If you can't tell, I'm certainly a fan.
Anyway, thanks for writing this essay! I'm sure the government will instate the plan soon.