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BlockedWriter21, nice to meet you! I'm wisegirl22, here for review week. Your character, Pierce, asked multiple questions, so "question" should be "questions". "I stutter out all these question withou

Hello, thealmightypencil! Wisegirl here for review week, clearing things out of the Green Room! You are the best writer I've seen. This is realistic, amazing, fenominal, and more than I ...

Hello, Jared. I don't think we've seen each other. My name is wisegirl, and my friend here is writer. Say hi! Only a (few) slight nitpick(s). Here, you need to ...

Allthingsflawless, hello! I believe we haven't met. Welcome to Young Writers Society, if you need help learning the ropes on this site just let me know! If you do like ...

HiImAndy, lookie here! Wisegirl22 couldn't bear it, so she came over to review! :D Hmmmm...language...stuff...knowing stuff...more stuff...a buncha other stuff...smiles...okay! Welp, that looks about

My dear friend 90skids, hello! I appreciate you writing more works, keep on publishing! I'm here to help you out of the dreaded Green Room! No one likes confusing sentences. ...

Hello, PassionateReader, I haven't seen you around much. Better start the frenzy now! This syllable scheme (is that even real?) is very catchy, and I appreciate the nice rhyme scheme ...

kbmcgregor3, hello friendie! Tell @nightcrawler I said hi! Titles are confusing. Many mistake it as trivial, never needing a capitalization or any attention. Those people are-wait for it-wrong. They'r

Hello, my dear friend (yes, already counting you as a friend isn't criminal), wisegirl22, proud reviewer of danceofparchment's work! This piece really captivated me. I immediately thought of Hall of ...

90skids, hello and welcome to Young Writers Society. You are fairly new, so if you have any questions come to me! Let's face the cruel world: semicolons are underused. No ...

Heyhey, Unique, haven't been around much 'ave you? Keep writing! At other points I would have ignored this little nitpick, plowing on rudely and lazily refusing to mention it to ...

kbmcgregor3, hello!!!!!! Welcome to this site, if you need any help ask me! Enjoy your life. As soon as I looked at this, I was marveling over your description, overused ...

Zafae0333, hello! I haven't seen you around much, you seem dormant on this site. Oh well, that's how most people are. I can't blame you. Please follow KatyaElefant...she's cool and ...

SapphireEyes! I wish you nothing but the best, and I think you'll get along well with Wolfie36 and Wolfare1! Happy reviewing, friend! Your syllable scheme was nice, no harm in ...

Hello, jessiethought, I'm back. I mostly agree with TakeThatYouFiend, about the repetition. I really like your description, and I clicked on this immediately. I would also like some answers. Is ...