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Wow. I can't believe it. This piece was filled with hate and cuss, and truth be told, I don't really like it. Maybe some more appropriate things would be better. ...

Hello, AaricaRae! First of all, I would like to say it's fine that you have been like is, just make sure you make up for it. I hope your mom ...

Hey, Rurouni! I'm here to review on this fine Review Day! First of all, "murders" is a noun. To make it an adjective to describe you, you could make it ...

Hello! Deep into the story, I see something that stands out. You need a comma after "corset", "machine", and "it", because this is a run-on sentence then. And, "torture" is ...

Heya, RandomCollumns! I'm here to review your work! So, to dive right in, here's the first thing I noticed. I think the first phrase isn't the best choice of words. ...

Hello, priceofwords! I'm wisegirl22, and I'm here for you! I can't believe this. You're amazing at poetry and your choice of words makes it stand out even more. I can't ...

Hello, artermis15sc! So, I'll dive right in. First thing I noticed, "he" should be changed to "her". "It couldn’t be that exciting, as he mother remained perfectly still in her ...

Hello, valdez! Nice to see another Percy Jackson lover! Although you think Leo is better. First thing I noticed is that your dialogue is not capitalized. So I think you ...

Hello, katiemeyers! Nice to meet you! Oh, and just remember, it's good to publish things you think need correcting, because that's what reviews are for! And you should probably change ...

Hello, musicandme! Nice to see a sort-of newbie publishing! :D Is this your first work? If so, congratulations! So, the piece started out perfectly. It drawed me in a haunting ...

Heya, writer88! Best friends gotta interact online and offline too! :D So, first thing I noticed, (even if I did co-write this) is that the first two lines are a ...

Hello, Krosby! Welcome to Young Writers Society! First thing I noticed-there should be a space after those commas. Second, always capitalize those i's. Third, a space after the period. The ...

Hey, wtppowers! Nice song you've got here. I think you should add a repetitive and catchy chorus, and maybe some more verses. This is was rather short, so I was ...

Hello, Thewriter13! Nice to see you write a song! I have no idea if this is intentional, but you have some random slashes between your words. "In the end/of it ...

Hello, Nike! Wisegirl22 here to review your piece on this fine evening! :D My first nitpick is that the first question mark should be an exclamation mark or a period. ...