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Hey, Deluca! Artie here for a review, on the Final Countdown of Review Day! And a late welcome to YWS. :) So, first off, I don't think you need a ...

Hey, Wanderlust! Artemis here for the Final Countdown. Happy Review Day! Oh, and welcome to YWS!!!!!! So, I honestly have nothing to say about this except the length of some ...

Hello, Artie here for the Final Countdown! This was amazing. I just don't really know how to explain it. It was so meaningful, even if it was only three stanzas, ...

Hey, Artemis here with a friendly review for the Final Countdown! Go Team Zenith :D *throws confetti* Oh, welcome to Young Writers Society. I hope you like it here! :) ...

Hey joallover! Artemis here for the Final Countdown! :D This sentence was a bit confusing. The wording wasn't so great, I don't understand what you meant by it. I would ...

Hey, Kadeelyn! Artemis here to review. Team Zenith for the win! :D Just so you know, you don't have to restate the title after your author's note, or even put ...

Hey, QueenofHearts! Artemis28 here for Team Zenith. Happy Review Day! :D The first paragraph was very detailed. You described the fight really well and I almost imagined myself as this ...

Hey, Chaser! Nice work you got there. :D Happy Review Day! This is pretty meaningful, and at the same time has a feel of dry humor. But I think that ...

Hey, Questio! Artemis here for Review Day. Go Team Zenith! :D So, I was confused about Old Glory and what it was until I finished reading the first stanza. I ...

Hello, StagesofInsanity! Artemis here for Review Day. Go Team Zenith! The first sentence, after "Dear word file," was a little bit confusing. I had to read over it a few ...

Hey Singham! It's Artemis here to review your work! :D First off, why is there an apostrophe here? There's not much reason for it to be there, unless you typoed ...

Hello! It's wisegirl22 here, for the review I promised! One typo. "Intranced" is supposed to be "entranced". "The man seemed intranced with the castle so Elsa repeated her question a ...

Hey, TheSilentBagpipe! I love Frozen fanfictions, and this looked really interesting. What's the harm of doing a review? :D So, a small typo right here. I think you meant "now"? ...

Hey, Elysium! Long time no see! Well, actually, I've been stalking your wall and not posting anything, but you get what I mean. :P I think this is a very ...

Okay, sorry I didn't get to comment longer. I replied to a post but didn't get to say what I wanted to. I can relate to everything this poem says, ...