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Hey, EverWinter! It's Artemis28 for a quick word here. I love the idea of this poem. I've seen these types before, the ones you read backwards and change into a ...

Heya, Sheadun! It's Artemis28 here for a review. (I'm honestly probably a bit rusty. Don't hurt me. >.

Hello, 5kKitty! Artemis28 with some rusty reviewing skills that she needs to polish! So, without further ado, I'll test them on this lovely piece of writing. :D Just be warned--I'm ...

Hey! I'm still rusty from months without reviewing, but I'll try my best. I hope I don't sound too harsh--I'm not trying to be! :) Let's start, shall we? Instead ...

Hey, writerkitty! I'm Artemis28 at your service, here for a review. :) Let's begin, shall we? In this part right here you use quickly twice in two sentences. That's one ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! I'm Artemis28 and I'm giving you a quick review. Shall we begin? So I noticed in your first sentence that "Josephs'" is not capitalized--and ...

Hey, CreativelyWritten! Artemis here... for another review! :) Let's begin. So the rhyme scheme goes pretty smoothly until this section. "Missing" doesn't really rhyme with "kisses." I'm going for the

Hello, Tmi! It's Artemis, here with another review in mind! :) Let's start with some of the first paragraph. Two words are redundant in this section--"burn" and "pleasure." Pleasure is ...

Hello, harry576! I'm Artemis28, here for a review. :) And fire is pretty cool element--but writing shall always be my favorite. Yes, it is an element. But anyway! Let's get ...

Hey, jessiebear! Artemis28 here to drop for a review. Happy Review Day! :) Let's start. This is a piece loaded with imagery, and its describes a very calm environment. But ...

Hello, MyBeautifulSins! It's Artemis, and I'm here to review for Review Day! Happy Review Day and welcome to YWS! :) Let's start... First off, there shouldn't be a comma after ...

Hey, LordZeus! It's Artemis here, and I wanted to review because this seemed like a very nice Percy Jackson story. :) First off, I want to comment on how the ...

Heya, thegirlwhowrites! I enjoy reading the Hunger Games, so I'm glad to see this! :) So, let's get started. There should be a space between "if" and "canceled." "At first ...

Hello, Izzy01! It's Artemis28 here, and I want to drop by for a review! Welcome to Young Writers Society, by the way. :D Let's get to the review. I spotted ...

OMG OMG IT'S CAMP HALF-BLOOD OMG OMG Me being a really big Percy Jackson fan, you must excuse my behavior about this. I just love PJO. There's a few things ...