emmylou1995

I really liked this. It was kind of sad but serious and hopeful too. You address your point clearly and the whole poem is to the point. Your capitalization is ...

I think this is a great start to a poem. The beginning is beautiful, with the definitions. But as the poem plays out, its not really clear what is going ...

I like this, though you need to fix the fourth line of the first stanza. It has too many syllables. The story seemed a little bland, though it was cute. ...

Oh....My....Gosh!!!! Thank you for writing this poem, it is now one of my absolute favorites! Its so true in my life right now! I like this guy and were total ...

I really like this poem. It made me really wish spring would just come already. I'm still in winter. I like the last part of the poem the best. About ...

I really like this poem. As almost everyone else has said, its very dark. But it is also very intimidating. Every word is true in the sense of reality and ...

I really liked this poem. It was a great display of emotions and feelings and imagery all tied into one. For one thing, I definatly felt as if the beginning ...

I loved this poem! So much emotion packed into so few words! For me, I don't know how having someone in your family die of cancer feels, but I do ...

Okay, I really like this. It is different than usual. I like your imagery and the vocabulary you used. It gave the poem almost a...phantomy-like feel. :) I like the ...

I absolutley loved this poem! It was beautifully sad and the wording was wonderful. For me, the repitition was awesome. This poem brought tears to my eyes, it was so ...

I love this poem. It is beautiful and simply eye opening. It addresses a topic that many girls, including me, have faced. i loved the imagery and the language you ...

I really love this poem. My two favorite lines were: Tongues so laced with candid wish AND From a fevered mind and fleeting kiss Beacause they really show and don't ...

Okay, I liked this alot. Stanza One: I think this one was the most not interesting of them all. I mean, I liked it, but there are some things you ...

I liked this. It was very short and to the point. I would like to know more though. What happened between them? Why was her heart already in a thousand ...

I think this poem is good, but it could be better. Add more imagery, add emotion. Don't repeat stanzas like you did as well. If you add imagery and line ...