emilybrodo

I am concerned that the beginning of this chapter is too boring, reviews would be highly appreciated. Otherwise please enjoy this piece of work from the book I am currently ...

???I thought that a prologue would be an excellent way to grab the reader's attention and keep them reading. Criticism would be really helpful as I want to improve my ...

This is chapter 2, probably not any better then chapter one, I wrote it a while ago and have read and studied a lot of books since. Tell me what ...

I'm thinking this chapter is less boring then the two before it, but then again, I'm the writer and you're the reader. Criticize away! : ) After a while Selina ...

Things get more interesting here, this is when the action really starts to happen. I'd love to hear what you think of this chapter. ???Good evening Moina, we have guests,??? ...

Please review! Enjoy. She was obviously moving, due to the gentle hum of the motor, and the occasional bumps that thrashed her up and down, plus the general motion of ...

This is probably the most interesting chapter so far. Reviews would be great! After about an hour of crazy fast driving, the car slowed down, gravel was flung from the ...

Stheno had yanked Jimmy and Selina away, shoving them and threatening them as she led them through ghostly halls. The castle was huge on the outside but it seemed it ...

Chapter 8, things are getting interesting. I hope you enjoy reading this chapter, I enjoyed writing it. Review this and I will love you

Because I like action so much, I tried to make these fights scenes as realistic and detailed as possible. Criticism would be amazing, and reviews and all that. ???Scary??? didn???t ...

This is one of my better chapters although I'm always looking to improve. Reviews would be great!!! Chapter 10 In horror stories, scary monsters jumping out of the dark ...

I haven't put up chapter 11 yet because it's not complete sorry. Reviews would be awesome! One foot after the other, left right left right, had become much more complicated ...

Reviews would be amaizing and i'll review some of your stuff if you request it, click on the link at the bottom of this post. Chapter 13 A jolt on ...

Reviews would be amazing guys, and I can review you in return, Enjoy! She took a deep breath. The wind rattled the beads that were braided into her black hair. ...

Someone suggested the story of Spot wasmn't a good thing, it's supposed to be a sad story. What do you think? It was fairly late in the afternoon. Selina was ...

Hope you enjoy, please comment or like if you like it of course! The glass fell to the floor, falling slowly as if time had come close to a stop. ...

Chapter 17 It was about three in the morning. They strolled around the corner like black cats and approached the toy shop that appeared strangely sinister in the dark. Two ...

Chapter 18 - awakening The first thing they heard when they got back to the base was laughter. This laughter, in particular, sounded strangely high pitched, as if chipmunks were ...

Depending on a weapons purpose, its power towards various things changed. In this case, a blade that could barely scratch a child had unimaginable power to the devils life. After ...

Chapter 19 ??? The beginning of a new body ???With each night, I take one more step, my bony feet slowly clacking along the wooden polished floors of what ordinary ...

Chapter 20 - training ???Breath in??? and out??????Camellia soothed. Selina obeyed, feeling her belly put out and in with each breath. ???Feel the power within you, feel it pulse

Chapter 23 A hand came from behind and wrapped around her mouth. She attempted to scream but he smothered her attempts. Before he could seize her arms she hit him ...

Chapter 26 The oxygen to his brain had been cut off. Like a snake, each time he struggled the arm become tighter. With every passing second, he felt himself losing ...

???We gather here today to celebrate Juliette Glow???s life.??? It was all black, the clothes, all black. It gave off a depressing feel, which may have been the point apart ...

Chapter 30 The vampire loomed over her, its fangs dripping with drool. It was about to strike, a wicked grin printed on its face. It licked its lips, tasting the ...

Chapter 31 ??? Zane???s story ???It is in my deepest nature, that I keep my love safe from the horrid things. May they take my life over hers. May she ...