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Hey, KeiPie! Isha here to review. :) First of all, I'd like to say that this poem is definitely one that many people will probably find very relateable, and that's ...

Hey there! Isha here to review :) First off, this is a pretty dandy little idea. Writing about what you can't write is the ultimate mark of frustration, and I ...

Hi, there! Isha here to review ^_^ I'm going to have to start by saying that I am really, really impressed with this piece. I've read a lot about being ...

Hey, Haz! Isha here to review (finally), as requested. Gosh, I don't think that I have a whole lot to say about this, honestly. It's very well done, as far ...

*cracks knuckles* H'okay, so I'm just going to cut straight to it. I mentioned to you over private chat that there are too many adjectives/adverbs, and occasionally verbs. For example; ...

Hey, Harshita! Here to review for you. :3  First off, this may not be my longest review to date, as I don't have very much to talk about. Just a ...

Hey there, Lylas! Isha here to review. First of all, this is a nice idea. People miss being a kid, and it can be a poem that's absolutely full of ...

Hey there, Garrett! Isha here to review. c: First and foremost, I can't say much as to the intrigue of the piece. It dragged on for a long time, in ...

Hey there, Lucky! Isha here to review for you. c: First of all, this is a nice little ditty you've got going. It was a little hard to see it ...

Hey, Natures! Isha here to review. c: Ooooh, now that was an interesting little read. Your narrator's (Tilly, her name is) voice was excellent. Your description was excellent, maybe a ...

Hey there! Isha here to review.  Well, way to rip my heart out and toss it to a pit full of rabies-infested squirrels and their pet demons. Really, now? Sixty ...

Hey there! Isha here to review. c:  First of all, I just wanted to say that as a whole, I agree with Beckiw. You've got a very powerful concept laying ...

Hey there, Pucker! Isha here to review. (:  Now, first thing's first.  I want to talk about the first and last lines of your first paragraph, and really, of the ...

Hey there, Alias! Isha here to review~ Well, this is a slightly intimidating piece to any non-writer who wishes to fall in love with someone who does write. And judging ...

Hey, River! Here as you so humbly requested I be. And I'm just going to say that I was quite blown away by this poem. The first lines (the last ...