dystopianmonkey01

Hey! Tiana here for a review. First stanza: lovely imagery. "The sunrise kisses the shimmering white". This really shows us what the sunrise looks like; just a tad of the ...

Ah yes! A fellow prose-poet. Your poem right here is an excellent example of something that's captivating and interesting. I read heaps of poems on here and a minority are ...

I like how you've played on words (chuck), this was well done. But don't overkill it, you did that a lot in the poem. But yeah, your paragraphs are waaaaay ...

Hey there. I'll just put it out there - I love your rhythm. It's so hard to pull off well but I believe you've hit the nail on the head. ...

Hey! I really really love this. It's something that you would read from Shakespeare; it's got that Old English twist to it, which you've used almost perfectly. Like the previous ...

Hey, this is really really well written! Well done. You have a similar writing style to me; tending to use a larger vocabulary. And I've received so many requests to ...

You've done this poem really well. At the start of the poem (the first 4 stanzas) are kind of boring and plain, for me, it's like an introduction. It starts ...

Wow, this is really deep. I did enjoy the metaphor of the river. I just find sometimes during your poem, in places like "There's a bridge", it sounds so blatant ...

This was a well constructed poem. I like it. I particularly enjoy how you've personified the City of Dreams as a woman, by referring to it being "locked up in ...

I'll jump straight in. I like how you've kept it constant and in each stanza there are 4 lines. Your rhyme scheme is constant which is also good. One thing ...

Hey, you wrote this poem really well! I liked reading it. For me, some parts of the poem felt like a Beyonce song. Out of curiosity, are these song lyrics? ...

Woah. Blown away, this is great. I really love your use of metaphors. You've used them spot on and it really pays off. The only thing I can fault is ...

Very meaningful poem. You outlined the meaning and message of the poem very clearly which is good. A few things: One, in the first stanza, "I’ve got some words in ...

Hey I like this poem, it does create beautiful imagery of what a white Christmas should be. But like the previous reviews have outlined, the 84 years bit is just ...

I particularly enjoy how you link your own opinions, the subjectivity, to the objectivity of love and how we care more about salvation than that of finding true happiness. Your ...