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Re: Hare Thinking
Love the poem!!!! Hey, hey, hey Dogs here for a awesome review! :) So I thought that this poem was really, very good, but let's look over your grammar, punctuation, ...
Feb 9, 2015 -
Re: Seasons Come, To and Fro
Hello! Dogs here and really I thought this was a good poem! As you say before the poem starts... //Decided to try writing a Villanelle. Don't think it turned out ...
Jan 30, 2015 -
Re: Aftermath
Hey! This poem was really, super good. Your rhyming seemed a little off in the second stanza though. But really that's okay. 1. we all make mistakes 2 I do ...
Jan 26, 2015 -
Re: I am Free
Hi! Great poem, but in the end it says I AM FREE!! I get that you are trying to prove a point, but during the poem the point was already ...
Jan 26, 2015 -
Re: Pressure
Wow! That's all I can say is... Wow! What's up Dogs here and love the poem. It's so... Wow! Nitpicks 1/1. So, I mean some people do this on purpose, ...
Jan 22, 2015 -
Re: All Checks Signed
Hello So I thought this poem was amazing! I am a Christian myself and I really enjoy learning and reading about God. This is something unique and interesting that I ...
Jan 2, 2015 -
Re: Diary Of A Dead Girl (Edited)
Hey! Dogs here! I have never read your work before, but I really like this. I think if you keep going then this will turn into a great and amazing ...
Dec 10, 2014 -
Re: Barrier
Hi! I'm Dogsrule5. I thought you poem was very good, and interesting! So anyway, for your first writing I didn't see much nitpicks, which is really, really good! Anyway... Let's ...
Dec 10, 2014 -
Re: Strangers
Good poem, but I do have a few nitpicks and a few slight opinions. OPINIONS: Opinion 1. When you say the words... Like two leaves falling down from a tree ...
Nov 13, 2014 -
Re: The Past.
This is good, it is smooth. It's great to read! Alright for a little bit in the beginning I thought this poem was kind of sad, and touching to the ...
Nov 5, 2014 -
Re: Lily
Hi. Dogsrule5 here to review! Alright so first off, this was a very unique, I don't think anyone would chose this topic and that's exactly why I like it a ...
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: I am not afraid
I really liked your poem, It was really good. And I really enjoyed reading the quote by Helen Keller, at the top of the page, but morely I really loved ...
Sep 10, 2014 -
Re: It's Better
Don't worry about this. This was great, I mean you could at on to this, but I certainly don't think you have to, I think it is good the way ...
Sep 10, 2014 -
Re: The composer
Hello this was a great poem, and this is... Dogsrule5 or a review,but not just any review, your review! Alright I thought this poem was really really good. I can ...
Sep 7, 2014 -
Re: Poem I just wrote- I love him.
Alright this was a good poem, but I have to say one thing.... Dogsrule5 here to start the review! Alright so, as I was saying I like the poem, and ...
Sep 7, 2014
