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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Hare Thinking

    Love the poem!!!! Hey, hey, hey Dogs here for a awesome review! :) So I thought that this poem was really, very good, but let's look over your grammar, punctuation, ...

    Feb 9, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Seasons Come, To and Fro

    Hello! Dogs here and really I thought this was a good poem! As you say before the poem starts... //Decided to try writing a Villanelle. Don't think it turned out ...

    Jan 30, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Aftermath

    Hey! This poem was really, super good. Your rhyming seemed a little off in the second stanza though. But really that's okay. 1. we all make mistakes 2 I do ...

    Jan 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: I am Free

    Hi! Great poem, but in the end it says I AM FREE!! I get that you are trying to prove a point, but during the poem the point was already ...

    Jan 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Pressure

    Wow! That's all I can say is... Wow! What's up Dogs here and love the poem. It's so... Wow! Nitpicks 1/1. So, I mean some people do this on purpose, ...

    Jan 22, 2015
  • Lyrics » Spiritual, General Re: All Checks Signed

    Hello So I thought this poem was amazing! I am a Christian myself and I really enjoy learning and reading about God. This is something unique and interesting that I ...

    Jan 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Supernatural Re: Diary Of A Dead Girl (Edited)

    Hey! Dogs here! I have never read your work before, but I really like this. I think if you keep going then this will turn into a great and amazing ...

    Dec 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Barrier

    Hi! I'm Dogsrule5. I thought you poem was very good, and interesting! So anyway, for your first writing I didn't see much nitpicks, which is really, really good! Anyway... Let's ...

    Dec 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: Strangers

    Good poem, but I do have a few nitpicks and a few slight opinions. OPINIONS: Opinion 1. When you say the words... Like two leaves falling down from a tree ...

    Nov 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: The Past.

    This is good, it is smooth. It's great to read! Alright for a little bit in the beginning I thought this poem was kind of sad, and touching to the ...

    Nov 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Lily

    Hi. Dogsrule5 here to review! Alright so first off, this was a very unique, I don't think anyone would chose this topic and that's exactly why I like it a ...

    Oct 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Lyrical Re: I am not afraid

    I really liked your poem, It was really good. And I really enjoyed reading the quote by Helen Keller, at the top of the page, but morely I really loved ...

    Sep 10, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: It's Better

    Don't worry about this. This was great, I mean you could at on to this, but I certainly don't think you have to, I think it is good the way ...

    Sep 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: The composer

    Hello this was a great poem, and this is... Dogsrule5 or a review,but not just any review, your review! Alright I thought this poem was really really good. I can ...

    Sep 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Poem I just wrote- I love him.

    Alright this was a good poem, but I have to say one thing.... Dogsrule5 here to start the review! Alright so, as I was saying I like the poem, and ...

    Sep 7, 2014


I was weeping as much for him as her; we do sometimes pity creatures that have none of the feeling either for themselves or others.
— Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights