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Hello there Llama! I'm just on a role with reviewing your writing today :) Dogs here as usual. Lovely poem you have here, I like how it's mostly dialogue based. ...

Hello there Llama! Dogs here with your review today. To start off, I really like the simple idea of this story. Although, unless you really lengthen it out I think ...

"This voice belonged to a boy, his voice" Hello there Shul! Dogs here with your review as requested. Ok I like the beginning note you start this chapter off on, ...

Hello there Persy! Tucker here with your review today :). Lovely writing, as usual, you have here. I think the title is my favorite part here, cleverly chosen for this ...

Hello there Twit my friend! Tucker here with your review! Lovely poem you have here. I really love how this is so to the point, you have something you want ...

Hello there Jack! Dogs here with your review today! Well this is a lovely piece of poesy you have here :). I myself greatly enjoy the free verse formatting from ...

Hello there Shadow! Dogs here with your review today! Firstly, I really love you avatar, that's a sick picture! Anywho, on to ze review, to start things off this is ...

Hello there Llama! Dogs here with your review again today! And once again WELCOME TO YWS! Let me know if you need any reviews or help with anything! I'd be ...

"from the dead, all flying" Hello there Chyrsa! Dogs here with your review today. Quick nitpicky note on this line, try putting a period after "dead" to separate the giant ...

Hello there Demtry! Dogs here with your review today! Ok, to start things off WELCOME TO YWS! I hope you enjoy your time here. I'm Tucker, and if you need ...

Hello there smallory! Dogs here with your review today! Firstly if I may say: WELCOME TO YWS! i hope you enjoy your time here. I'm Tucker, and if there is ...

"Mr. Pitchet's reaction when he recognized me was not at all welcome" Hello there Liam! Welcome to YWS! Dogs here with your review today. I think you have a good ...

"What lurks in the darkness is not visible" Howdy Able! Dogs here with your review today. A couple quick notes about this line, firstly I think you should use a ...

Hello there Hajar! Dogs here with your review today! Firstly if I may say: WELCOME TO YWS! I hope you enjoy your time here. I'm Tucker, and if you need ...

"The LORD your God is in your midst" Hello there Birkhoff! Dogs here with your review as requested. So couple things I wanted to point out here: Firstly, I'm not ...