dewdrop

hey, that is a really short and sweet poem. i think you made a mistake though in the third line it says 'under on lone' i think you meant to ...

hey, you write a great poem!! but a few lines seemed to be a little off: 'Flying through the dawn, whispering a love song' - this doesn't really fit the ...

wow!! that a really cool song! you might not read this review but if you do maybe you could show me what kind of rhythm this would be to?

thats a really sweet poem. only one thing...you rhymed the first two stanzas, but the last one rhyme as well, maybe that could be edited. but overall thats really grat ...

wow that was a really insightful poem, though i am not poet i did catch a few mistakes: 1. the sentence 'I wandered away so desperate to find' is a ...

wow thats a really strong poem and a great read. i am not a poetry expert so correct me if what i say is wrong but is the structure not ...

you have used some really ambitious vocabulary here. there are a few typos but if you maybe re read it i am sure you will find them, if not just ...

Bravo. This is a really intriguing poem. Its smooth in that all of the lines begin with a capital letter. Also all of your stanzas are of the same length ...

This is really great poem. Its short and sweet.But i think there is a typo on the first line it says "It it not linen or faded wallpaper", i don't ...

First off this is yet another outstanding poem. The flow is just like i said outstanding. I do think that you need to edit it a little because some lines ...

WOW! That was truly heart wrenching. All i can say is keep on writing stuff like that and Stephan King will need to step out of the way! ;)

This is a really great poem. The way it flows is really amazing. I love how it is so descriptive as if you have been there your self *wink wink*!! ...