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This is really great poem. Its short and sweet.But i think there is a typo on the first line it says "It it not linen or faded wallpaper", i don't know whether the second it is intended or not. Also, the structure is a little uneven - some lines begin with capitals and some with lower case letters, maybe that's how you wanted it. But overall a meaningful and amazing piece of poetry!!