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CONGRATS!!!!!! YOU FOUND IT!! :D haha Yes the reapeat in the poem is annoying but thanks! Congrats on getting 200 reviews! :) I'm honored to have the 200th review! :D ...

I read poems on YWS in the summertime and I loooooove your poem!!!!!!!!!! :D - Neonmask Oh and did you draw your profile pic? It's really good! :D

Amazing...:p -Neonmask

Hi nice job!!:) I liked it a lot! :D Bye! -Neonmask

Oh Speakerskat i just realized down there that you wrote originally It wasn't a poem!!!!! oops I thought you wrote that it wasn't even a poem before I just now ...

It was too a poem!!!!! :) And a good one at that! :D Nice job Speakerskat! XD

haha chill..your poem was super good with out being in stanzas!:)(or spaces and lines and paragraphs) :D haha.......yeah...That's a bummer for you though..:(

Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D OK....um...*I remain speechless* (while gasping for breath because still in shock that a human could even write that

Hi Speakerskat! Lemme start off by saying, ''GOOOD work!!'' *Big smiley* :D The only thing that was..sort of....had a lot of was the, ''It's so strange'' That's probably obvious though, ...

Thanks BlackNether12...:) And I will probably(might, might not) go ahead and re-do it! :) Expanding it and things like that would help. The abrupt ending reminds me of an opera ...

Yeah..thank-you for your tips and ideas!! :) I just now saw that before I read your comment that I had not made the word petal plural..:/ But thanks! :) - ...

Hey what a good poem! It's creative and interesting! :) And I wanted to say that it's cool that you are writing about nature! It was neat-o (I'm a dork ...

Um...pretty good! :) -Neonmask

Nice job!:) -Neonmask

Mindblown thanks for the comment! Yeah I totally agree about the length of the lines, and I'll read your poems(and comment on them)! :) I'm glad you enjoyed my strange ...