defiantAuthoress

This is very good! I like the feeling of it altogether, but there are quite a few things that I think you could do to improve it even more. The ...

Wow, I'm very impressed by this poem! I think it definitely embodies the true meaning of success, a contentedness with where you are on any given day. I love it! ...

Wow, this is great! It's a very sweet and inspirational poem, I like it a lot! Just a couple things that I had issues with, but none very major. One, ...

Hello there! I really, really love this poem. It feels very realistic and harsh, which is something I love when someone is writing about youth. As one, I can really ...

Hello there, friend! First of all, I really really like this poem's concept. It's very poignant and I enjoyed reading it. My only complaint is that it seems like the ...

Hey, I really like this concept! I feel like it's very poignant and meaningful, but I think that your flow and communication of the point could be more clearly defined. ...

Hey, this is a very good poem! It evokes a lot of imagery and I totally understand what the poem is about, and it was very descriptive. It's definitely dark, ...

Wow, I really like this! It flows very well, and I can definitely understand what you're getting at here. The only issue that I have is a couple small grammar/formatting ...

Oh, I really like this! It gave me chills and I can imagine it very clearly. The first line was very, very good, but I feel like the second line ...

Wow! I really like the concept of this poem, it's very gripping and visceral. It really makes me wonder what's going on in this horrible society, and piques my interest. ...

I really like this! It really captures the essence of the beach, and it makes me think of a cool summer night spent in the dark next to the water. ...

I really love this poem! I feel like it very accurately describes love in a lot of different ways. I'm actually more than a little blown away by this. "V. ...

Hey there! This is a very interesting poem. I love the concept, and I love the voice of the character that you have created. The thing I had the most ...

This is interesting! I definitely get where you're coming from here. I think there are a couple things that you could definitely do to help this flow better, though! You ...

Wow. This is really, really interesting. I love how definite this character's personality is, it really comes through in the writing. Every line feels essential and important, and the first ...