defiantAuthoress

This is a really great poem! It's very clear what the conflict is, and I can really feel where you're coming from. There are some great lines in here, one ...

Wow. This is very well done, there are some really terribly beautiful lines in here. I especially think the lines, "Counting seconds in this living hell/Until I can get home ...

Wow. This is such a visceral poem, it doesn't sugarcoat anything and really gives you a sense of what is happening in this relationship. It was tough to read, but ...

Wow. This is such a deep poem, and so subtle in its meaning. I reread it quite a few times just to get the full effect. It's amazing that such ...

Yay for romance poems! I applaud you for pulling a Taylor Swift my friend, they're always fun to read. Anyway, I quite like this, you describe this love very well. ...

Wow! This poem really resonates me for some reason, it actually reminds me of a relationship of mine. It's very easy to imagine, and actually gave me some chills. I ...

Hmm...this is quite an interesting poem. I almost feel like it's about the fall of the World Trade Centers, perhaps? Maybe I'm taking it too literally. It sounds childish and ...

Wow, this is great! Generally acrostics can come off as very forced, but this one is very effortless. I love it. There are only a couple things that I would ...

Wow! These poems are so beautiful. I really like that you combined these, because it really shows the contrast between the beginning of the relationship and one year later. Each ...

Yay for a fellow NaNoer, and I applaud you for doing it in poetry! I wouldn't be able to do that, as much as I love the craft. Also, I ...

Yay for a fellow Whovian! *highfives you before getting into the review part of this* You already get rad points from me for expanding on this. I think that a ...

Hey there friend! First of all, this is a really great start to your fanfic. I like it a lot, and I can't wait to read more. I do, however, ...

Wow. This is...wow. This is such a good poem, really. I can imagine it all perfectly in my head, the description is very, very well done. If anything, at times, ...

Wow! This piece really got me, it has a lot of emotion in it and I can definitely feel that. My favorite line is what seemed to be the chorus: ...

Wow, this is wonderful! I really love the imagery in this. I can really feel the light beauty of the summer's kiss, it's simply exquisite. The only thing I noticed ...