Love it! Too often I think of acrostic poems as a preschool activity, but you certainly done a great job at making a decent acrostic poem.
I interpret this as a person dying, and no one is there to call 911 for them. It's sort of upsetting, but amazing at the same time.
You did a fantastic job at writing an acrostic with numbers, that must have been so hard.
All that is left of me
Lost its reason to live.
Like a picked flower.
The flower bit is great! I love it.
And now I don't know anything else to say. There aren't any problems with this that I can find.
So. As it's Pokemon review day.... (Sing along please!!)
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