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Re: 360° until you die
To be honest, I'm not a huge fan of this poem. I really like the concept, of someone trying to get someone to turn around so that they'll be murdered, ...
Jan 27, 2014 -
Re: Princesses Anonymous
Hey there! This was SUCH a fun story to read, and I'm so happy I clicked on it (anything that has princesses in it has got my review!). I really ...
Jan 27, 2014 -
Re: On Fire
Wow! This is a great poem. I love how short it is, and yet you manage to convey your meaning perfectly. I really love how easily I can flow from ...
Jan 27, 2014 -
Re: Obselete Absolution
Wow. This is quite an interesting concept. It's very dark, and I think you did a great job executing the darkness in this piece in a gentle way. My favorite ...
Jan 19, 2014 -
Re: Internal G.P.S.
Hey there! Here to review. I'm not sure how I feel about this poem. It just felt very abrupt. I think I would like it more if you wrote a ...
Jan 18, 2014 -
Re: Paintball Poetry
Hey there! First of all, I really love the paintball field concept that you have here. I think it's a really fun analogy for love; paintball is so crazy and ...
Jan 16, 2014 -
Re: Allusive Issues Adressed
Wow. This is a very strong piece, and such a great one to start your time here on YWS. While on the subject, welcome! I hope you love it here ...
Jan 15, 2014 -
Re: Wrists
Wow! Such a strong message in this poem, I applaud you for taking on such a subject. I really like a lot of your prose here, especially, "faint blue and ...
Jan 13, 2014 -
Re: Opposites Attract
Hey there! Kekai here, to do your review. First of all, this is really great! I love a lot of the phrases you use in this poem. I really like ...
Jan 6, 2014 -
Re: Watercolour Winter.
Wow! I really love the imagery in this. I think that you've done a great job in painting the "watercolour winter" in your poem. If anything, there are just a ...
Jan 6, 2014 -
Re: Silver dawn
Wow! I really like this. It's very deep and well-written. Also, I'm really sorry about your moor. I hope that this review helps you feel better. First, just to let ...
Jan 5, 2014 -
Re: In the Morning
Phew. You weren't kidding about the dark thing. This poem is incredibly visceral and actually gave me chills. The middle lines, especially, "Shadows loom as she's locked in her room./Silver ...
Jan 4, 2014 -
Re: The Hat Man.
Hey, this is an interesting poem! I like the concept of the hat man being a "solid rock, and the people, the sea". This poem gives me a lot to ...
Jan 4, 2014 -
Re: a girl who may or may not be radioactive
Wow, Miri! I've never read any poetry by you, but I have to say that I'm very, very impressed with this piece. Jade Harley is one of my favorite Homestuck ...
Dec 30, 2013 -
Re: A Stream Of Consciousness
Wow. This really spoke to me. It actually gave me chills, and I can relate to a lot of it. Each image is very beautiful in my mind, and each ...
Dec 29, 2013