Wow, this is very interesting, very in depth. I'm not even sure if I understand it, but you use a lot of great symbolism, as well as imagery that brings some powerful ideas to mind.
I really like this line,
"for the first time once again."
Since it's contradicting itself, which is always fun in writing. Your style is definetely interesting, and different. You break up the poem in a cool way that flows with the subject matter itself, which is to say, it almost doesn't flow, which gives it that jagged feel until the end that I like so much.
Good work!
Thank you athoughttookmyfancy!
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