deathwave1

Hey! A late welcome to YWS! First off, the imagery in this poem was spot on. It transitions smoothly from each image to the next, so great job on that! ...

Oooh, I love this so much. There is so much hypocrisy when it comes to non-LGBT+ people being allies. I applaud you for calling it out, and in such an ...

I liked the emotion and feeling of the piece, but there's some conventional errors that distracted me a bit. I had to reread the third and fourth lines several times ...

Okay, first off, I seriously love the use of bold text. I don't think I've ever seen that on here before. Extremely creative and unique, I salute you! I think ...

Hey! I really enjoyed this. I was raised agnostic, so I can't really relate personally to the religious aspect of it, but I found the overall message of the piece ...

Okay, first off, I absolutely love the formatting. It gives the poem an aesthetic beauty as well as a literary appeal. Second, the imagery here was flawless. I loved the ...

Hey! I loved this. It manages to tell a story without really telling it, if that makes sense. It's more focused on the emotion than the actual story, which I ...

Well, first off, this is pretty cool. The lowercase lettering definitely fits well with the idea of the poem. With step two, "you try to ignore" is a bit confusing. ...

Hey! That was impressive. You used some excellent imagery throughout the poem, but spread out enough that it wasn't overwhelming. Your emotions clearly shine through, and the overall work is ...

Wow, this was good. I think it really strikes a chord with anyone who's ever hurt themselves. Emotionally, this poem is amazing. However, there are a few things as far ...

Oh wow, this was good. It introduced an idea in the first two stanzas that was just clear enough to be interpreted freely by the reader and still retain the ...

I absolutely love your rhyme scheme, and that's not normal for me. Usually, I can't stand rhyming poetry (weird, I know) because it tends to sound forced, but this piece ...

If this is you rusty, I'm jealous. Right, now that that's out of my system, on to the review. Is this a description of an anxiety attack? It doesn't have ...

I like this one. It describes a miserable situation I think we can all relate to in a creative way. I loved how you set it up, with the description ...

Hey! First off, this was a very well-written poem. It flowed nicely, especially for a piece without a consistent rhyme scheme. I very much liked the third stanza, and how ...