Hey! ChocolateCello here (Again)!
Happy review day!
This poem was fantastic. Your descriptions were beautiful, really pulling the reader in and adding to the atmosphere. I could practically hear the storm. The similes and metaphors were wonderful too. They didn't seem like a stretch, but instead they were very relatable and really added to the descriptions.
The flow was really smooth and everything read nicely. Nothing felt forced or out of place and all the vocabulary tied in nicely with the story.
The ending was by far the best though. It was a bit unexpected (Apart from the title) And I couldn't help but smile.
Keep up all of this amazing work and I really hope to see some new works out from you soon!
-ChocolateCello
Points: 192
Reviews: 245
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