dbrick

Hey, this is an excellent riddle (I just wish you hadn't included the answer at the end :p). Your straightforward rhyming pattern worked well and caused the poem to flow ...

Wow, this was really good! It definitely got my attention right away and made me want to continue reading. I especially like that at the beginning you explained the situation, ...

Hey, dbrick here for a review. This poem was very pleasant to read, it had a calming "mood" to it and reminded me to savor the sweet things in life. ...

This was an incredible poem! Such great word usage and the rhyming flowed well. I especially love the contrast near the end of the poem "But with You, I get ...

Hey, another good poem! It communicated how you felt about music well and you used good imagery. The verses were a little random (in terms of structure and where the ...

I loved this poem! It was nice and simple, no fancy words or phrases; just how you felt about your music teacher. And that is what makes poetry great, when ...

Hey, dbrick here for a quick review. I knew this was an excellent poem before I even started really analyzing it. Your simple rhyming scheme, descriptions, and word use are ...

Hey, dbrick here for a review! I had to read this poem several times through and really think about it (this is not a bad thing). The first two lines ...

I like this poem. Your lines where very heartfelt and communicated a lot. However I was rather unsure of the story or idea that you were trying to get across, ...

This was an interesting read. I nearly forgot that I was reading poetry I got so engrossed in the story. The thought that comes to mind when reading this poem ...

Hey, dbrick here for a review! The appeal of this poem was really in the structure, your use of words, and your eloquent conclusion to your poem. Like others have ...

This was a really great poem. It was sincere and really shows the type of unconditional love that we should all strive for in our relationships. In fact, that is ...

I liked reading this poem. Even though there wasn't a whole lot of rhyming the words still blended well together. As Omi1 said, the beginning doesn't really make that much ...

This was a good poem. It delved deeper into a seemingly mundane task and revealed the past sorrows of the neighbor. The wording and your writing was eloquent and went ...

This was an interesting short story/conversation (I am not sure what to specify it as). It really got me thinking (I guess that is the point, huh?) about curiosity and ...