Have you ever thought?
Well obviously you have. You’re
thinking right now, “What is wrong with this writer? Why am I
even reading this?”
But I don’t mean that kind of
thought.
thought (thôt)
v.
Past tense and past participle of
think.
n.
1. The act or process of
thinking; cogitation.
2. A product of thinking.
3. The faculty of thinking or
reasoning.
Wow. Thanks dictionary. You could
use a lesson from my elementary school teachers, who taught me not to
use a word or its root in its own definition.
So what does think mean? According
to an online dictionary I found, “direct one's mind toward
someone or something; use one's mind actively to form connected
ideas.”
Ignore the first part.
Use one's mind actively to form
connected ideas.
Alright, so you’ve done that
too. But on a small scale. A tiny, miniscule scale.
Why is the sky blue?
No, don’t answer that. I know
why. But there was a time when I didn’t know, and same for you.
Maybe you thought then. Let’s be honest, you probably weren’t
considering some scientific explanation. When this thought first
occurred to you, it’s likely you were pretty new to the world,
just beginning to grasp the concept of your existence. You knew very
little about the world, and collected that small information a put it
into a little pile to figure out the answer.
That’s thinking. But still on
a small scale.
It’s a very good example,
though. You were young when you asked that question. New. Thinking
happens when we are new. To something. Anything. It can be as
small as a book. You might think a little at the beginning, when you
don’t know all there is to know.
Small children are great at
thinking, because they have so many things to think about. We really
underestimate them. The world needs more thinkers.
But little kids grow up fast. And
they forget what they thought about. They fill their minds with
meaningless things and willingly become absorbed into this sponge of
the human race.
Maybe you thought a tiny, tiny
bit at the beginning of this. You knew I couldn’t be so
daft to assume that I believed you had never thought in your life.
You thought about why I asked.
But I still haven’t gotten to
the big part. The real thinking. Not everyone will ever think
like this, remember. So it’s ok if you don’t. I just
strongly recommend you do.
Let’s start with life, shall
we?
Life. It’s pretty cool. You’re
glad it’s there, but you never questioned it.
Unless you did. In which case,
congratulations. That’s the first step.
We say “the
miracle of life” all the time. The question “why does
life exist?” has become a cliché. You probably haven’t
given these phrases a second thought. You should. Why? It’s a
miracle because one little bacterium jumpstarted every form of life.
It’s a miracle because none of us would be alive if not for
that one bacterium. And “why does life exist?” is an
unanswered question. That’s what thinkers do, answer the
unanswered.
Life is pretty weird. Describe to me
what it is. Right now. No cheating. Hey! I saw that! One of you
looked it up in the dictionary! It’s ok, go ahead. Doesn’t
matter. The dictionary’s wrong anyway, as far as thinking goes.
It says, “The condition that distinguishes animals and plants
from inorganic matter, including the capacity for growth,
reproduction, functional activity, and continual change preceding
death.” That’s science. Don’t get me wrong, I love
science, but science is forbidden in thinking. It’s ok if your
thoughts’ roots are in science, in fact they usually are, just
don’t include it. It’s the rules.
Of course thinking has rules! You
thought this would be easy?
Tell me, with no science, what life
is. Imagine I know nothing, but I can comprehend what you say. Tell
me.
See, it doesn’t matter that I
can’t hear your response. You don’t have one. At least,
not a decent one. No offense. It’s ok. I don’t have an
answer either. Nobody does. That’s why you likely haven’t
questioned life before. When humans don’t know something, we
either make something up and argue that we’re right, or push it
to the side and ignore it.
But thinkers are those who come
close to answering.
If you’re one of the few who
have questioned life, then you are destined to be a thinker.
Some of you might say, “So is
a thinker basically a philosopher?”
True, thinkers and philosophers seem
similar, and thinkers can be philosophers (also vice versa).
But that’s from a
non-thinker’s perspective. They are very different.
Or maybe you believe you’re a
thinker already. It sounds pretty simple, there’s no perfect
way to describe it.
But I can tell you what it’s
like
People with the capability to be
thinkers are the people who can listen to Einstein’s theories,
and organize them in their brain before their head starts to spin,
which is pretty impressive in itself. Thinkers are the ones who add
to those theories.
You’ll be sitting, lying down,
standing up, whatever, and there will be nothing to distract you. You
are blocked off from the outside world.
Thinking.
Then suddenly, you realize
something.
You feel like you are bursting. You
look up, run outside of your mind and take a look at the world
through a whole new light. You can see so much more than you did
before, and you can’t imagine what it was like to live such a
bland life, immersed by ignorance.
If you have never felt that, you are
not a thinker.
Not yet.
Hold on, you’re still here?
Really?
I guess you thought thinking was
pretty cool, didn’t you?
Maybe you are already a thinker.
Which is awesome.
But you probably aren’t.
Become one.
If you decided to read this entire
thing, then you probably can.
Just remember what homo sapiens
means.
Man who thinks.
That’s right. Thinking is what
sets us, humans, off from all other animals. Thinking makes us the
superior species.
But also know that you will get no
recognition. Zero. Zip. Nada. No matter how much you do, how much you
discover, how many light bulbs go off in your head, nobody is going
to care.
Basically you’re Nikola Tesla,
especially the light bulb part.
And you have to be ok with that.
because when you’re a thinker, you understand that life is more
than fame and glory.
You might never become a thinker.
But maybe you will. And if you do, maybe someday you’ll find a
nexus to all of the things you have thought about, and you’ll
have a full understanding of them. That’s how geniuses are
created.
They think.
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I loved this completely except for the part about rules. To me, the whole point of thinking and "thinkers" are that there are no rules. That's how you really think; think beyond what you've been told, and eradicate any rules or boundaries you had in your mind. If you want to go to the dictionary or refer to science; fine. How do you think people came up with the suddenly much-resented scientific ideas? They thought beyond the boundaries. Science, as you state, is great. It's magnificent. And it was instigated by thinking. Without rules.
Thanks!
You are welcome XD
Hey, buddy. It's Mr. Powers here, with another fun and exciting review. Today, I'm looking at the very interesting thing you wrote, called "Think."
Well, for starters, I love your conversational writing style. It's kinda like mine, which makes this easier to read. Anyway, onto the thing itself.
I agree with all of this. We often don't think about some important matters, because they're too difficult, or they're too stressful. And little kids are terrific thinkers. That's the reason behind that phase in life where they question everything you do. The Why phase.
The only thing I don't like about this is the length and the sloppiness. Probably because you chose to upload a document, and that's why it looks weird. But I'm not going to question you on this (get it?) because it's yours.
In the end, I find this to be a very thought-provoking piece, worthy of a like. I'm sorry I couldn't be more helpful, but I'm a tad preoccupied. So, so long, kind sir (or ma'am). Keep on writing, because you're good at it!
Why have I not found this until now? Did I skim over it in my notifications? Anyway, thank you (despite my thanking being a bit late)!
You have a really good voice that you carried through when you wrote this. I really enjoyed the language you used and the sentence lengths that evoked mood and like I said, inner voice. For example, "Wow. Thanks dictionary. You could use a lesson from my elementary school teachers," shows your voice and emotion through the writing. The writing was very meaningful and I really enjoyed reading it.
I just have to say, this is really, really cool, and really, really amazing. I'm going to be thinking about this for a while.
Haha, thanks. You're going to be THINKING about that?
Hey, dominusatramentum! FireFox here to review your piece on behalf of the Apple Dumpling Gang!
Well done!
Needs Improvement:
1. Grammar/spelling. There are a few grammar and spelling mistakes here and there, but that's not to be worried about until the absolute final draft anyway. Focus on the main point of the piece for now.
2. The text. What is up with the text? The font and the structure is just very distracting! I would have been able to read this much easier and faster if the font and structure were normal.
3. Some of it seems a little bit repetitive, but perhaps that was your plan? If so, disregard this one. But I think that you could have replaced some of the repetition with some different thoughts. Perhaps you could give us an example of one of your flashbacks from childhood in which you came to realize that you, too, are a thinker.
This is most definitely an interesting piece, different than most that I have read on this fine Review Day. I thoroughly enjoyed this, as it is refreshing. I feel that this would make for a great speech, as I could literally hear it being read inside my head! You know it's good when your readers don't hear their own voices reading it inside their head, but the voice that belongs to the piece.
-FireFox
Thanks! Yeah, the font isn't supposed to be like that. Must be a glitch or something.
Wow, I think I was too tired to read all of that, but what I did read, was amazing. Thought is such an interesting process, I've never heard it explained in such detail and in such an interesting way. Here is a sample of one of my childhood thoughts (don't know why I remember it, but whatever):

"Have you ever thought about thinking about what somebody else is thinking about. And then, would if they happen to be thinking about the same thing you are thinking about..."
It certainly is a hard one to grasp. Took me about two hours of staring at the ceiling at night trying to put it all into words. Anyways... back to your stuff... I loved the analysis you gave and the comparisons you drew. It's interesting because your right in saying that we only ever really think about something when the concept is foreign to us. Cool thing is that there will always be information for u to delve into, young or old. And it's weird that this bit from your work stuck out me, but here it is:
" Life is pretty weird. Describe to me
what it is. Right now. No cheating. Hey! I saw that! One of you
looked it up in the dictionary! It’s ok, go ahead. Doesn’t
matter. The dictionary’s wrong anyway, as far as thinking goes.
It says, “The condition that distinguishes animals and plants
from inorganic matter, including the capacity for growth,
reproduction, functional activity, and continual change preceding
death.” That’s science. Don’t get me wrong, I love
science, but science is forbidden in thinking. It’s ok if your
thoughts’ roots are in science, in fact they usually are, just
don’t include it. It’s the rules. "
I liked this, as well as a lot of your other thoughts, because you describe your own definition of the word and look at everything in a new light. That's admirable in my opinion. Great work. I loved it and look forward to hearing more from you.
Thank you so much!
This was an interesting short story/conversation (I am not sure what to specify it as). It really got me thinking (I guess that is the point, huh?) about curiosity and questioning things. You weren't afraid to put your thoughts out there and, as a result, this piece comes off as very genuine. The way that you wrote it as a conversation was great, it really made this appeal personally to the reader. This was thought provoking!
Thanks!
I don't know what's up with the font.