To the man who taught me music for oh so long,
Thank you for your valuable time.
To the man who made music spark to life for me,
Nobody else would have been able to achieve that.
To the man who weaved life lessons in his teachings,
I am better prepared for life now.
To the man who taught that music is played by how you feel it,
Music is never played the same way twice by me.
To the man who stuck with me through thick and thin,
Life is changed forever for me.
To the man who is no longer my teacher,
I am sorry to see you leave.
To the man who is now teaching different kids,
Your mission had been accomplished with my friends and me.
To the man who taught me music for oh so long,
I love you.
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This poem is a winter's snow, falling smoothly to the ground, creating a winter wonderland. Meaning: this poem is beautiful. It was simple and short. No complicated phrases and whatnot. So on to the review (or nitpicks)
1. Capitalization- nothing wrong in this category
2. Spelling- nothing is misspelled
3. Punctuation- everything is punctuated right
4. Grammar- everything is grammatically correct
Your grade- 100%
Reviewer's note- this was beautiful and I saw no imperfections. You earned your grade.
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I loved this poem! It was nice and simple, no fancy words or phrases; just how you felt about your music teacher. And that is what makes poetry great, when you can successfully channel your emotion and feelings into it. I could totally relate to this poem, I have a music teacher exactly like you described. It reminded me of just how blessed I am. I look forward to reading more of your poetry!
Such beautiful poem! I adored how you said to spoke to you. How it taught you about life. I can't spot any errors, but I was never good at grammar or spelling so don't take my word for it. But on how good it is on the other hand I can give you my word that this is just great!