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Hello, dankmemelord here! Grammar: I didn't really see any grammar mistakes but I may have overlooked something. Praise: I think you had a really good start your first sentence was ...

Hello, dankmemelord here! Praise: I loved this short story. This was well written and interesting to read. I was intrigued the whole time and just wanted to keep reading. You ...

Hey, Dankmemelord here! Praise: This is a really interesting and unique story! I enjoyed reading this it was very entertaining. Grammar: In the second line you say "Her phone buzzed ...

Hey dankmemelord here! Sorry for the short review First of all You had a nice idea but it doesn't seem to be displayed very well. Your grammar was nice but. ...

Hey dankmemelord here! Praise: Your first sentence really drew me in and made me want to continue reading it. I loved the story line all of the details you put ...

Hey dankmemelord here! First things first, I love Alice in Wonderland! This poem is wonderful. I found no corrections. You used a lot of literary devices such as imagery and ...

Hey, dankmemelord here! Sorry for the short review. I love this so poem so much! The way you describe the battle is absolutely amazing. I really have no corrections for ...

Hello it's me! Praise: You use a lot of imagery in this so I can really tell what you are trying to say. I like the way you worded everything. ...

Hello, it's me! Sorry if this is a really short review but there really isn't anything for me to correct. Grammar: Okay I know you wrote this on a typewriter, ...

Hello, it's me! Sorry for the short review, but i guess its is kind of a good thing because there was nothing to correct. I loved this it was so ...

Hello, its me again! Grammar: I saw no grammar mistakes but I do suggest looking over your work in case I may have missed something. Other: This is probably the ...

Hello, its me! Grammar: I saw no grammar mistakes except for in the last line. It just sounds awkward. To fix it I think that you should add the word ...

Hello, its me! First of all, welcome to YWS hope you enjoy it here and if you have any questions feel free to ask me I would love to help ...

Hello, its me! First of all, welcome to YWS and I am so glad that you are enjoying it so far! Feel free to PM me if you have any ...

Hello, its me! Plot: This had a very well thought out plot it had a clear start, conflict and resolution which is necessary for a plot. Characters: The character names ...