crissymarx

Hello there snazzy name of a pencil. Great job! I would've like it to be a little longer to get more of your point across, but that's not really a ...

I like this poem a lot. And nice visual, by the way. The only real complaint I have is that you repeated crumbling. It just seemed like a mistake, unless ...

I really like this a lot. When I first read the title I was like what on earth....but then as I read the poem, I started to grasp the meaning ...

This is so short, so simple, yet also so effective and beautiful. At first I thought you had put this in the short story category and I was confused but ...

I am not going to be one of those people that may or may not be thinking why the heck did you use italics for only the word "of" in ...

Hi there! Good concept of a poem but I honestly didn't entirely understand why war was your comparison to love. I might just have not caught on, I don't know. ...

I really like this and don't really think it needs much more or much editing. It's simple but effective. Let me start off by saying that I love the third ...

I agree with comments below...this poem really makes a person think. First off, let me start by saying great job. I really love the thought you put into this poem ...

Hi there! This was really good! And I especially like the fact that rhyming isn't as popular in poetry right now and it can sometimes be cheesy but you really ...

Wow this is deep. I am literally at a loss for words. Not really because I am talking right now...anyway great vocabulary! The only thing I have to comment is ...

First off, so sorry about your friend. :( I have ended up losing SO SO many friends over the years because they cared more about themselves and their boyfriends and ...

This is a very effective poem. I love it! I liked it up above ^. I only have one comment and then I shall positively compliment you for the rest ...

Hi there! This is beautifully written, by the way. And very creative if I say so myself. I love your use of the word "children" throughout the entirety. For some ...

Hi there! I like the thought you put into this poem but I do have some comments (really just 1) First off, i really don't feel as if you need ...

Hi there! Great poem but I do have some suggestions... First off, I would like to say that this is a great idea for the meaning of the three L's. ...