Live, Love, Learn

Great piece of writing, really liked your perception about the three L's.
Your poem is short and to me it completely describes about the love and learn pattern.
In short spell it gives you the good idea about how to live, love and learn in your life.

Hi there! Great poem but I do have some suggestions...

First off, I would like to say that this is a great idea for the meaning of the three L's. Great job in that aspect. But there are some times throughout the poem where you change tenses ever-so-suddenly and it kind of throws me off. I would suggest changing lines like

"who seems to attract," to who seem to attract or something else that doesn't confuse the tenses as often. All in all, good job! Keep writing!

So sweet, and so true!

gv7233

It's short yet beautiful.

I love how the message is simple. But sometimes you just need a little simplicity.

I think the shortness of this poem is a wise choice. Even with the shortness of it you did a wonderful job portraying emotion and the theme of the poem.

Overall great job

Live, love, and learn. This poem is great. I am unknown391625 and here is another review.

First off, I love this poem. It is so true. I love the emotion in it. It doesn't rhyme, but it's so great it doesn't need to rhyme. It tells you hermits and people cooked up in your little houses to live life to the fullest. It's an amazing message. Anyways, punctuation and grammar is good. Your first line starts it off amazing. Then lines two through seven just build up the emotion and felling. And the the last line ends it off perfectly. Magnificent! I love this poem. I would like to see more of your work. Don't give up and always write, gv7233!

-Unknown91625 (A.K.A. Edgar Allan Poe)

Live, love, learn. That's great. Your work has a lot to say, more than what you've written. Although it seems sort of hanging. I just feel like something is missing. I don't know what it is. Maybe I just can't see the connection of everything in the whole work of art of yours.

Anyways, it is good. I like the title. Actually, I do use a similar signature whenever I let someone answer something. It sort of common though. It goes like this: live, laugh, love for Jesus. It might not be original but I just using it.
If you don’t mind, may I know what your inspiration is when you made this? There is always a reason in writing something write? Even if your reason is you just felt like it, I would still love to know.

Keep on appreciating the good things in life and accept its not-so-good aspects. Life goes that way anyway.
Keep on writing. I’ll try to read your other works too.