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Re: end of the world et cetera et cetera
This poem,about the end of the world,is interesting.Especially from the perspective of a person who doesn’t seem to care about anyone or anything.It’s almost as if they knew and wanted ...
Sep 29, 2021 -
Re: Beautiful Mistake (Time Travel Short Story)
This was an interesting story about finding family.It’s beautiful,yet sad to think that living in the 1800s would be better for Rose than living in her time period.I was just ...
Sep 28, 2021 -
Re: You Fool
Wow! This relates to how every person on Earth might feel.Someone’s blind ignorance to tragedy and terror is the real threat in this world.Just saying whatever can change the world ...
Sep 27, 2021 -
Re: growing-down
Moving poem.It’s thought-provoking and questions the meaning of life.I think everyone has thought this way favorite lines in the poem are:”Everything feels quite scripted.” People have definitel
Sep 26, 2021 -
Re: A nighttime blur said 'free us from the writing article'
Cool poem! This seems like the kind of thing that would be in a positive poetry book.I love reading these favorite lines in the poem are:”Let us dream in our ...
Sep 25, 2021 -
Re: Your Beauty
Lovely poem! I love the message you’re giving us,the readers.That we are beautiful no matter what.It’s beautiful and favorite parts of the poem are these lines:”Find a mirror” and “Not ...
Sep 24, 2021 -
Re: The Stinging Tang
Cool poem! I believe this is about leaving and the scent of home never leaving favorite parts in the poem were these lines:”The night is gone” and “the waking death” ...
Sep 23, 2021 -
Re: nightingales
I enjoyed this poem.I loved the message of how life can be reborn from the ashes and destruction of only we helped the world favorite parts were these lines:”We may ...
Sep 22, 2021 -
Re: Your Grave is Empty.
I liked the poem.Anything a that has to do with graves or just had that Halloweenie feel to it,then,I’m going to read seems to me that the narrators feels grief ...
Sep 21, 2021 -
Re: I am the Invisible
What a lovely expresses the loneliness of not being noticed,yet,not knowing how to break it,because it’s so easy to live by favorite parts were these lines:”Because I am a ghost ...
Sep 20, 2021 -
Re: All-American (Witch) Girl:Two
I don’t know if you remember me,but I commented on your last story about Minnie.I’m liking this story about the witch girl so far and I’m excited to see it ...
Sep 19, 2021 -
Re: Lost time
I loved this poem.I like to read these types of poems,talking about love and time.There is a certain magic to it and that’s what this favorite parts in the poem ...
Sep 18, 2021 -
Re: Missing you in Maine
I like this poem and the meaning of missing someone so favorite lines were at the start of the poem:”..I started writing this poem.I wanted to write that you were ...
Sep 17, 2021 -
Re: Tree War
This was a very interesting story.I could see this as a Disney animation.I loved how you humanized the birds,it really makes the story more fun,to imagine them wearing pajamas and ...
Sep 16, 2021 -
Re: benevolence
Lovely poem.I love it the message that you are giving us,that maybe the god (or gods) are showing kindness to us by giving us the simplest things in life,like trees ...
Sep 15, 2021
