Hey Ellie a incoming review from jay and i came to drop a review on your poem on what i have read
so lets get in to it with your poem
First off Ellie your poem was amazing when i had read it and Ellie and i have a good line that i actually love in your poem Ellie I step into the mirror
Reality and existence intertwine
You are encircled with light
Burdened with my sorrows but Ellie keep up the great work and the effort that you had gave us
Second my compliment is Ellie you should be proud for what you do cause people showing love if a poem like this is really good Ellie and you worked on what you feel
and Ellie how you can improve is your work and keep writing your poems down and express your feelings on what you hear and what you feel deep inside Ellie but your poem was incredible Ellie you did your part
keep writing Ellie by jay but this was just a quick review Ellie!!
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