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Re: Chickens
This was a cute poem you made.I enjoyed reading this poem about paints a vivid picture in my mind of a family farming chickens.I could picture this like a wholesome ...
Feb 12, 2022 -
Re: the end
I’d take it that this poem is about when love cannot be reached,because there is too much in the way of your love.Too many obstacles,to the point where it’s like ...
Feb 11, 2022 -
Re: i read / too much / of you
Aww…this is a nice poem! I love how this person cares for the other person and will love them no matter what,flaws and all.It’s so rare to find people like ...
Feb 10, 2022 -
Re: driving back from dinner
So here’s my take on the poem:It’s about driving from a family event,not being able to talk to each other in the car,out with too much on your minds.Everything seems ...
Feb 9, 2022 -
Re: My invisible mask
We hide our emotions from others,in fear of what will happen.But if we just talk about our feelings or write them down,we’ll feel better.Any of the two is helpful,as long ...
Feb 8, 2022 -
Re: To The Ever-Dishevelled Maid of the Eternal Mist
I think the poem is pretty good for a first this your first time? I don’t want to assume or anything.But yes,the poem does have a rhyme kinda flow to ...
Feb 7, 2022 -
Re: fool's gold and false gods.
Yes,when we are below people,we get labeled as the “crazy” or “weird” least,that’s what I think part of the poem is about.I also believe it is about someone who has ...
Feb 6, 2022 -
Re: The Purple Instructions
So,what happens next? I guess that’s left to our imagination.I wonder if the flower has any significance in the story.Does it symbolize greed? Desire? Or perhaps,reality just out of reach,in ...
Feb 5, 2022 -
Re: Carlo
This was a fun short story to read about a disruptive seems like he doesn’t care for what the adults have to say.The only thing that’s got his attention is ...
Feb 4, 2022 -
Re: no (mirror lies) between us
I have enjoyed reading this poem.It’s about love and how connected people feel with each other,that they’d do anything for each other.They’d wish for their very love to never,ever end.Alas,not ...
Feb 3, 2022 -
Re: Conversions
Very thoughtful and poetic! Yes,this is true.Change is inevitable,no one can avoid matter how hard we try,we cannot escape will follow us through the end of time,the ancient trees know ...
Feb 2, 2022 -
Re: love
I liked reading this poem about was real and beautiful.There isn’t just one person for us,there could be other people waiting to meet us.We don’t ever have to meet other ...
Feb 1, 2022 -
Re: a raging sea
I loved the descriptions you put in the really does create beautiful imagery.I love how you described how the narrator was fooled by this person and how they plan to ...
Jan 31, 2022 -
Re: Bella, Horida Bella
This was fun to read.It’s so detailed and has lovely a few short lines,you described the effect wars have on people.And often,we’d ask ourselves:”What is the point of winning a ...
Jan 30, 2022 -
Re: 'Writer' Limericks
Ooh…those were fun limericks to read.Yes,I do relate to some of these.I could have an idea and find out that it’s already been done.It’s frustrated and annoying,but then,I can come ...
Jan 29, 2022
