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  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Chickens

    This was a cute poem you made.I enjoyed reading this poem about paints a vivid picture in my mind of a family farming chickens.I could picture this like a wholesome ...

    Feb 12, 2022
  • Poetry » Romantic, Spiritual Re: the end

    I’d take it that this poem is about when love cannot be reached,because there is too much in the way of your love.Too many obstacles,to the point where it’s like ...

    Feb 11, 2022
  • Poetry » Other, Teen Fiction Re: i read / too much / of you

    Aww…this is a nice poem! I love how this person cares for the other person and will love them no matter what,flaws and all.It’s so rare to find people like ...

    Feb 10, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: driving back from dinner

    So here’s my take on the poem:It’s about driving from a family event,not being able to talk to each other in the car,out with too much on your minds.Everything seems ...

    Feb 9, 2022
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: My invisible mask

    We hide our emotions from others,in fear of what will happen.But if we just talk about our feelings or write them down,we’ll feel better.Any of the two is helpful,as long ...

    Feb 8, 2022
  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature Re: To The Ever-Dishevelled Maid of the Eternal Mist

    I think the poem is pretty good for a first this your first time? I don’t want to assume or anything.But yes,the poem does have a rhyme kinda flow to ...

    Feb 7, 2022
  • Poetry » Literature, Narrative Re: fool's gold and false gods.

    Yes,when we are below people,we get labeled as the “crazy” or “weird” least,that’s what I think part of the poem is about.I also believe it is about someone who has ...

    Feb 6, 2022
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Purple Instructions

    So,what happens next? I guess that’s left to our imagination.I wonder if the flower has any significance in the story.Does it symbolize greed? Desire? Or perhaps,reality just out of reach,in ...

    Feb 5, 2022
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Carlo

    This was a fun short story to read about a disruptive seems like he doesn’t care for what the adults have to say.The only thing that’s got his attention is ...

    Feb 4, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: no (mirror lies) between us

    I have enjoyed reading this poem.It’s about love and how connected people feel with each other,that they’d do anything for each other.They’d wish for their very love to never,ever end.Alas,not ...

    Feb 3, 2022
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Conversions

    Very thoughtful and poetic! Yes,this is true.Change is inevitable,no one can avoid matter how hard we try,we cannot escape will follow us through the end of time,the ancient trees know ...

    Feb 2, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: love

    I liked reading this poem about was real and beautiful.There isn’t just one person for us,there could be other people waiting to meet us.We don’t ever have to meet other ...

    Feb 1, 2022
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: ​a raging sea

    I loved the descriptions you put in the really does create beautiful imagery.I love how you described how the narrator was fooled by this person and how they plan to ...

    Jan 31, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Bella, Horida Bella

    This was fun to read.It’s so detailed and has lovely a few short lines,you described the effect wars have on people.And often,we’d ask ourselves:”What is the point of winning a ...

    Jan 30, 2022
  • Poetry » Humor, Culture Re: 'Writer' Limericks

    Ooh…those were fun limericks to read.Yes,I do relate to some of these.I could have an idea and find out that it’s already been done.It’s frustrated and annoying,but then,I can come ...

    Jan 29, 2022


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