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  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Tree of Life

    Ooh..I love the imagery in the was so descriptive.I could picture all of this in my mind,like a movie.I also liked the style of the font.The text you used in ...

    Jan 9, 2022
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: gaunt

    Ooh..I loved this poem.The way you wrote it made it look like the person was slowly descending into insanity.I also loved the way you described it.I feel like the narrator ...

    Jan 8, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Wooden Planks Floating

    This poetically describes how we didn’t think much of this pandemic,how we were so first,people thought that it would only last a week and nothing more.What a surprise when we ...

    Jan 7, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Freedom

    This is intresting,to hear the thoughts of someone who is dying.The feeling of never going to be able to go back to the people you love,the feeling of being disconnected ...

    Jan 6, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Elevator Music

    This was a nicd short poem to read.Sometimes,it does feel like we are going nowhere admist our wants and will feel like being stuck in an elevator that leads to ...

    Jan 5, 2022
  • Poetry » Humor, Mystery / Suspense Re: Gift from an angel

    I enjoyed reading this poem about angels and the gift of life.The fact that people hate this angel makes so much sense,because we are taught that wanting stuff and having ...

    Jan 4, 2022
  • Poetry » Science, General Re: Water Poems: Flowchart

    I liked reading this piece.The way the words were laid out gave the poem so much more impact and meaning.When the word “nothing“ is read,you can feel the nothingness from ...

    Jan 3, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Catastrophic Pain

    I love the way you described the feelings and pain the solider is going through as he walks among a matter who wins,in the end,a war is still a war.People ...

    Jan 2, 2022
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Reunion

    I loved the details and imagery from the poem.The descriptions you used were magical and was fairy-tale does feel like a childhood memory with your descriptions.It’s how we all imagine ...

    Jan 1, 2022
  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: A Piece of My Mind

    I loved reading this poem! I can relate,I do stay awake at night with ideas.But how can anyone not? The inspiration comes late at night,when no one else is around ...

    Dec 31, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Green is not always green

    I’d say this poem could be about change and how we can’t’ always stop things from happening.We are the fish,fighting change,which is the ducks and the pond is the world,changing.Sometimes,it’s

    Dec 30, 2021
  • Poetry » Literature, Literature Re: Happy New Year!

    Ah yes,a poem celebrating the New Year! Something we all need after the two previous years that happened with us.I myself can’t wait for 2022.Maybe everything will be under control ...

    Dec 29, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: An Unfinished Tragedy

    Wow..this poem was really emotional.The painful feeling of knowing that a beautiful love never started is described well over here! I have a question is this (or some of this,anyway) ...

    Dec 28, 2021
  • Art » Health, Spiritual Re: Prison of Perfection

    Yes,I totally agree with what you just said in this piece,100%.Not only that,but I can relate to it,too.I really want to do things perfectly and make sure that the stuff ...

    Dec 27, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: For a Fallen Angel

    I enjoyed the poem.This person,the narrator,would do anything to protect their loved ones.Even if it hurts them in the process,because they are helping their loved one out.Clearly the narrator feels ...

    Dec 26, 2021


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