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Re: Just Upload!
This poem is just relatable! Judging from the comments already made,I’m not the only person who thinks this.I feel impatient updating my own stories believe it or not.I just want ...
Apr 29, 2022 -
Re: :(
I think this poem portrays well what being overwhelmed feels like.I know that people have felt this,including me.I liked reading this,good job.But we can overcome these feelings by asking for ...
Apr 28, 2022 -
Re: Rhyming "Jack"
I think this poem is about a mother asking for her son to come back.Maybe he won’t,considering that his sister died.He might feel maybe he really wants to avoid that ...
Apr 28, 2022 -
Re: Puzzles and Papyrus
I think that the first part of the poem could be the guy discovering he doesn’t love someone as much as he thought he did or at all.The second part ...
Apr 26, 2022 -
Re: shadows of my dejection
So did Kylia leave her family? Did her adoptive family disown her? Is she alone with her feelings? Maybe her past never truly left her and it never will.It’s just ...
Apr 25, 2022 -
Re: don't forget about me
It’s hard when you feel as if you made a mistake.Like you caused someone hurt and pain.You will feel like it is your fault.It’s not.Things happen sometimes.All we can ever ...
Apr 24, 2022 -
Re: Radio Heart
I think this is an interesting poem.I wonder if the radio heart is a metaphor for your heart which still beats and plays the old song.A new song,too,so you aren’t ...
Apr 23, 2022 -
Re: That Awkward Moment
I think this was a cute poem about the little awkward moments in life that happen to all of us.I don’t ever wear matching clothes lol.I like to mix and ...
Apr 21, 2022 -
Re: Peaches and My Dying Sunflowers
This girl seems like a wonderful person from what your poem says.When we miss someone,it can affect us,because that one person was our whole world and suddenly,they’re gone.I hope she’s ...
Apr 20, 2022 -
Re: Chrysalis Coffins
I think this is about how you feel with one-sided love.Or maybe you feel as if your love was never meant to be.Like it’s too good to be true,like it ...
Apr 19, 2022 -
Re: embers
Aww..This is a sweet poem.I’m guessing that it’s about Kylia escaping her master and finally finding love in a new family.I think that the family might have taken her will ...
Apr 18, 2022 -
Re: N.A.P.O
Who doesn’t love making poems? It’s a great way to pass time and have fun while doing it.I enjoyed reading this short little poem.I can agree that this kind of ...
Apr 17, 2022 -
Re: From Books
I liked this poem.We all want to escape reality and live in books because usually with happily ever after books,everything works out in the end and justice is served.But with ...
Apr 16, 2022 -
Re: That Boy🌻
It’s hard to not put the blame on yourself.It’s so easy and we do it too often.But if someone else hurt you in a way,then it’s not your fault.It’s theirs.Like ...
Apr 15, 2022 -
Re: malediction
I’m back for another Kylia angst poem! It looks like she seems to blame herself for a lot of there any hope or justice for her? Or is she doomed ...
Apr 14, 2022
