This was an enjoyable short poem, I love the choice of words and how you space out each section with enough substance and thought of their own to portray how Jack's mother is feeling as she navigates writing this letter. I feel like you could carry this idea of a letter out into it's own larger story and it would still keep the same quaint spirit to it! Thanks for posting this and have a nice day/night
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